 TAE 2005-10-04 . chapter 1 Lovely. There aren't nearly enough Brass stories out there. A retired Bomb Squad Sergeant I once knew used to say that he should have become a plumber. Very good work. |
 SMKLegacy 2005-10-03 . chapter 1Excellent! I made up the lines and couldn't avoid either lurid and obscene things or GSR, so you managed a lot better than I did :) Love the Brass/Grissom introspection, too. |
 JackFan7 2005-10-03 . chapter 1Very...unique, but I really do like this story, it rules in an odd and...well odd way. LOL |
 jessielou 2005-10-03 . chapter 1I loved it. Very believable and can just see Brass and Grissom having a conversation like that. |
 leddy 2005-10-03 . chapter 1Nice story. I like the conversation between Brass and Grissom, even though Brass never got a straight answer. I think you nailed Grissom's reasons perfectly. |
 loose-cannon-with-a-gun 2005-10-03 . chapter 1Like your story, great lines within it including the two you chosed to provide.
Well written! :-)
-loose- |
 Denese925 2005-10-02 . chapter 1I like. And it was refreshing that is was NOT GSR. |
 LapsusStili 2005-10-02 . chapter 1Although I'm disappointed that you PURPOSELY avoided making this a GSR fic (ha ha ha), I'm still happy to report that it was a good story anyhow.
The heart-to heart at the diner was completely in character for both, and the conversation had good flow.
Well done! |