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Reviews For: The Flame

courtjsonluvr87 returns
2006-07-10
ch 1,
abuseWow again! It's no wonder you're an English major! I can definitely tell. You're a really good writer!
Just some person
2006-05-05
ch 1,
abuseI liked that, it was so poetic, symbolic, nice. It was really sweet, I liked the whole concept of the flame thing. Fire is one of my favorite things (not to sound pyromaniatic) and I liked how you used it here.
~Rachelle
Em-958
2006-01-07
ch 1,
abuse*SOB*

Priceless. You've done it again. You got me crying, as in this story is so sad but so good sdo I can't hold in the tears" - way .. Plus Sara McLachaln - Angel was playing in the background.. just priceless, you rock :)

Can't wait for more sad stories like this one..

Your fan,

//:Emma
LilyoftheValley4
2005-10-03
ch 1,
abuseAw, that's so sweet...if only Vaughn HAD approached the van. *sigh* oh well...
dandan2300
2005-10-02
ch 1,
abuseaw my gosh im speechless
that was omg he should have listened to whatever that was and gone to check the van it would have been so much better
if this was a one parter it was fantastic
if its a chap then i really cant wait for more
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