Reviews for Chaos in the Moon

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Sexy Neko Hibiki 2008-06-18 ch 8,	abuseUPDATE!
Nearly Indi-cent 2008-06-10 ch 8,	abuseI am interested to see how this develops, Although I would suggest not putting it all out there so quickly, let some suspense fester for a while. Also where are the other royal guard boys? I am excited to see them show up
Asgeras 2008-05-20 ch 8,	abuse(sniffle) That's definitely a sad note to end things on. True, a lot of what the Amazons did was underhanded, but still...(sigh) Cologne would have made such a great advisor for Ranma too... I don't know why I took so long to get to this fic. I surmise that it's because you've put it somewhat on the backburner in preference to some of your newer fics such as Twin Trouble. While I DO like Twin Trouble, I think this fic is actually a mite bit better. It definitely has its highlights, that's for sure. No matter what the case may be, though, thanks for sharing this fic and I do hope to see an update sometime in the not-so-distant future. Ja ne. ^^
Daniel Thomas Stack 2008-05-17 ch 8, anon.	abuseIn case you want to include them in memories or anecdotes to classmates or the Senshi when they start wanting to find out about the previous few months here is how I see Ranma's more common insults to Akane revised for this fic. You're built like a brick! - no change needed. You're completely too thick! - instead of thighs are too thick. You talk like a Hick! - This one never made sense to me. Can't even kick! - no change needed Uncute Tomboy - Both still fit. You're food makes me sick! - Don't remember it being used but it fits. At least after the camping trip where Ryouga learns the Bauksai Tenketsu which didn't happen in this fic. I still have no clue why Washu in Goddess form would take the Nyannichuan. Unless there's someone else with 3 stones on their head. Oh your notes list the person taking the water as Leena. Is that an OC? And I still don't see why they took it all. I hope you can continue this soon. I'd love to see Naru and Umino's reaction to 2 Usagi's. You did already make it pretty clear that they would make Ranma go in girl form. Will Setsuna's mother be a school councilor? Does this Leena have any minions planned yet and will any of the later series events from Sailor Moon Manga or Anime show up in this fic? Lots of questions but it has been a while since the last update of CitM. Daniel Thomas Stack Spokavriel @ yahoo . com
Sheya 2007-08-09 ch 8,	abuseI await the next chapter
Taeniaea 2007-05-16 ch 8,	abuseI Love The Chapter:8 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!
borg rabbit 2007-04-12 ch 1,	abuseThe existence of a Sailor moon manga is a little strange. Maybe you could have something to explain the presence, like an author being a channeler.. or something. Wes Spelling and grammar narc: I’ll barrow the Janitor’s kettle and we can change you back then I’ll borrow the Janitor’s kettle “So long as it’s accredited to my dept.” “So long as it’s accredited to my debt.” His argument with Akane and bashing Kuno help him stray from it for a bit His argument with Akane and bashing Kuno helped him stray from it for a bit (I really think that this could be phrased better, as in: His argument with Akane and bashing Kuno helped to remove the dream from his consciousness for a bit) in fact consider you dept canceled. in fact consider you debt canceled. After school Nabiki went strait to work. After school Nabiki went straight to work. Please take a careful look at the rest of your stuff or get a good copy editor.
Blackdex 2007-03-23 ch 8,	abusePlease continue.
Adeptis 2007-03-18 ch 8,	abuseGood chapter ;D
Meca Vegeta 2007-01-16 ch 8,	abusecool
Emma Iveli 2007-01-12 ch 8,	abuseHahaha! This is a good story... I like it... I love the fact that Sailor Moon is an aniem and manga and the fact Rumiko Takahshi has manga too... very good.
Howard Russell 2007-01-09 ch 8,	abuseWhy would she have to get cured first? The nannichuan that Ryoga fell in is a cursed spring like any other and it completely replaced his previous pig curse. If Ami uses the nannichuan in human form, it should replace the cat curse. I just don't think it's a good idea to pair Ranma up with someone who turns into a source of terror for him. Far more cruel than funny. A boy curse, however, can be damn funny.
Innortal 2007-01-09 ch 8,	abuseGreat addition.
Dragon Man 180 2007-01-08 ch 8,	abuseI know as Sailor V Minako had some more items to help her, so are they in her subspace pocket?? If so I can't wait to see what else she might pull out. I also want to see Ranmyaku and Ranma fight.
Maric 2007-01-08 ch 8,	abuseYes let Mina and Mousse become a couple^_^ It has always been my dream to read a Mina and Mousse love story^_^ (maybe with a little bit of lemon added.)

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