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champylin
2009-05-26 . chapter 15
hehehe... I totally love this story... and for ONCE! I've been blessed to read a fic which has Hinata going after the guy and none going after her... LOLz although it gave me some unsatisfaction to see NAruto having her easy... but hell! It was beautiful! LOLz
saorsie-chan
2008-11-20 . chapter 15
i love it.. wuho
alwaysNaruHina
2008-06-11 . chapter 13
It would be great if you make a sequel of this story
alwaysNaruHina
2008-06-11 . chapter 14
This is the second time I read this fic, and I still enjoyed as much as I did. Beautiful story!
jojoma-kitsune
2008-05-10 . chapter 15
I LOVE THIS FIC
SO AWESOME BEAUTIFUL
:D
2008-03-11 . chapter 15
Er du norsk? Me 2! xD E likt historien din veldig my! Den e dritbra og du e kjempeflink til engelsk !!

Klem fra meg ;)
Kunoichi
2008-03-07 . chapter 9
hi! just had to say you are a really good writer. =] i mean, the first chapter was confuse and hard to understand, but i love the way you describe everything, from hinata's snowflake eyes to naruto and sakura together while he's apprehensive and thinking that he can't lose her and can't protect her when she's gone. it's just *beautiful*. so congratulations! ^^
and i do think that naruto forgot sakura a little too fast... =p but i'll wait to read what's in store for him. =]
and i can totally understand why sasuke would act like a bastard.
anyway, great fic!
dd
2008-03-05 . chapter 11
u want my opinion well ill give it to u i hate naruto and sakura this story sucks its naruhina for me u should rewrite the whole thing a narusaku fic is just rong plus who the hell likes narusaku y are u doin this to naruto and hinata... Sakura is in the way ofnaruhina i hate it... and yet i don't know why im reading it but ijust am...

ps.. good try but next time no narusaku... yuck

my opinion kk i know alot of other people feel this way to god...
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alwaysNaruHina
2008-02-23 . chapter 15
OH MY GOD...it's so beautiful, I love it...I really really love it! I enjoyed every single word of this story, it's amazing, awesome, wonderful. I looking foward for the next story of yours! keep writing, you're very talented !! you're one of my favourite author! thanks for writing a wonderful story ;-)
Feuer und Wasser
2008-01-03 . chapter 15
one of the best romance naruhina that i had ever read...!
noname00
2007-10-18 . chapter 2
nice fic so far^^
Blacknoise
2007-10-17 . chapter 4
I really do like this story, but I find you're using adverbs a) too much and b) too awkwardly, which gives it an air of "thesaurus-fishing", meaning you look for synonyms for diversity's sake, but they're not always the right ones. Don't be afraid to be blunt in your prose once in a while, and tone down the awkward adverbs. Then you'll be sailing.

Again, good work.
yourtypicalpsycho
2007-10-16 . chapter 15
i LOVED this story!it made me cry,smile,and all that other stuff!
Chronostorm
2007-10-04 . chapter 15
That was really and i mean really well done story don't know how long ago it was made and it didn't have the adventure that i normally look for it was very deep i guess and i enjoyed though it was slightly depressing in a way well it was a great story either way :)
AAA99
2007-08-29 . chapter 1
so Beutiful.
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