|Reviews for In The Sun|
| mikeee 10/31/05 . chapter 3
this story looks very promising. I understand tsunade's reasoning behind his emotional attatchment with sakura, which could jeprodize the mission, but what does the kyuubi have to do with it? he's shown that he can controll it when he gains his powers. well i have to say im dissapointed that naruto wont get any action with the ninjas that beat neji, but im looking forward to your next chapters!
| Achalon 10/31/05 . chapter 3
I like it, but at the same time some elements bother me... Mainly that Naruto would -never- leave Sakura in danger without going to help her, even if it meant that he could never again be a ninja if he did so. It just isn't Naruto... Hell, he would burst into the Hokage office at the first sign of trouble and tell her as much.
You write a good story, but it is killing who Naruto is without any explaination as to why he is such an entirely different person now.
| Herofury 10/30/05 . chapter 3
This story is pretty damn good. The beginning author notes ruined of whats to come though.
Very emotional story. I like them like that...
God, I hate feeling all depressed and such... .
Good story... made me feel depressed. lol
Thats a compliment and not meant to insult you. :')
| Mr. Boomba 10/30/05 . chapter 1
I love this story! Please keep updating. Though I feel sorry for Naruto for what he is going to be going through soon, I'm interested to see what happens. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| shadowkeepre 10/30/05 . chapter 3
I love your writing; it's very beautiful. I was happy to see more of Hinata in this chapter.
Looking forward to your next installment!
| warprince2000 10/25/05 . chapter 2
Cool story! can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter (update soon Plz)
| shadowkeepre 10/24/05 . chapter 2
I really like this story. I found it at just the right time, and it left me with a bit of a feel-good feeling. There's still the whole "sad" vibe that I've got for Hinata's predicament, but I really can't wait to read the rest of it! This is the first N/S/H that I've found... I hope it turns out that way, ultimately... the "coupling" is different, and I am, personally, a N/H supporter, all the way. Good job at capturing the characters, and the changes they have gone through as they've matured. I will (im)patiently await your next installment.
| RedemptionHeart 10/23/05 . chapter 2
This is one of the most detailed romance fics ive read. Your style really helps capture the emotion of all the characters without making it drag. Very good job! Not many authors are able to capture that! I hope to read more of your great work. Keep it up!
| DJ Rodriguez 10/17/05 . chapter 2
I like on where this is going. Naruto has both Sakura and Hinata. _ Good. I can't wait until things really start to heat up here.
Hinata and Sakura... two bright stars that are the only things that help Naruto break through the darkness. I hope that neither of them go out.
Keep it up!
| Drolkrad 10/13/05 . chapter 2
Wow,I am really impressed, you're writing style is truly beutiful. I have found these first two chapter's to be very touching. And i cannot wait to read what you write next, this has to be one of the most beutiful and touching stories i have read on I look forward to you're next update, please continue to keep up the impressive work ja.
| blackman 10/13/05 . chapter 2
this is very good, i hope for this will continue for a while. But how will it be sakunaruhina if sakura dies?
| Minako Setsuki 10/13/05 . chapter 2
Good job! Please update soon. I just luv this story!
| thestoneox 10/13/05 . chapter 2
you'll have to excuse crazy. he's a bit, well... crazy. isn't that right? hehe. he's right though. you write good stuff. it will be upsetting to see sakura die, but then again the only person it doesn't really bother me when they die is sasuke (well, and the bad guys of course). I'll look forward to your next update, and I'll get crazy some like, valium... or something.
| carrot stix 10/5/05 . chapter 1
wow! that was beutifully done! and naruto sakura is such a cute pairing and you did a fantastic job with it.
| gonekrazy3000 10/3/05 . chapter 1
Oh my god... i love this story... i love the NaruSaku moments... i lo... *breaks down and starts to sob uncontrollably* WHY DID YOU HAVE TO KILL SAKURA...WHY? why ? why?... wh...*sniff sniff* can't you let her live somehow ? please ? i love NaruSaku... and i love this story because you write very good NaruSaku... why did you kill sakura ? why ? *sobs* she's dead isn't she ? the Sakura in this story is just a memory... isn't there any hope of her living ? isn't there a way to keep this a NaruSaku ? *breaks down once more*