Beautiful. I'm not one to write huge, long, intensly
thought out reviews (f, I usually don't even spell check when
I write reviews), but now I wish I could so that I could give
this fic the homage it deserves. Four reviews? Shame. This
fic is why I love Mariku. I'm glad to see that someone else
is writing to pick apart at the psychology behind his character. Wonderful~

why are you so obsessed with yami malik?

I liked that, especially how most of it was very... peaceful, in a way, almost luring the reader into thinking that there was nothing to fear from Yami Malik, and then nearer to the end hints of violence, until the second-to-last paragraph, in which his characteristic excitement at violence shows through, but at that point the reader is practically won over.
Or at least I was. Or something. And that sentence up there is definitely a run-on. Sorry.

Brillant. Beautiful. My praise falls to your feet as usual. Once again your descriptive writting skills have left me in awe and more than a pang of envy. The way you traced his thought process...so realistic. and the way you started it...powerful opening with the 'haze' and 'atoms' description. I fuckin' loved it. Don't you dare be humble!

good story. dun worry it duzn't seem cut-off to me. a really ineresting thing to think about tho, the content i mean. that's why ur the best!
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