A your story is awsome can wait to the next chapter, are you going to get naruto to meet Kyuubi and get them to an arrangment or Naruto to learn youki control?

That would be a cool idea for jiraiya to become a missing nin and develop a darker personality

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! You CAN'T stop HERE! At least label it if your gonna hiatus/abandon!

"Unbreakable"

You said you made me and you break me
You said it ain't hard to shake me
You threw me ever since you've taken me down

You came like a rainy grey monday
I prayed like it was a sunday
You say, you say
But I won't run away, I'll be standing my ground

Seen all the screaming and fighting
Lived through the screaming and lying
I'm fine, you can't deny

I'm unbreakable, unstoppable, I'm invincible
C'mon bring it to me, cuz I'm always gonna be unbreakable
Reliable, undeniable
Come on give it to me, cuz I'm always gonna be unbreakable

Don't need the diamond cards or cold cash
Don't need to sell my soul so don't ask
Took a pass on the bass I'd be leaving right now

Newsflash, I'm causing a commotion
Jump back, I'm poetry in motion,
Think fast, talk trash
Well I ain't talking back but I'm calling you out

No time for fussing and fighting
Lived through the screaming and the lying
I'm fine, you can't deny

I'm unbreakable
Unstoppable
I'm invincible
You're gonna bring it to me

I'm unbreakable, unstoppable, I'm invincible
C'mon bring it to me, cuz I'm always gonna be unbreakable
Reliable, undeniable
Come on give it to me, cuz I'm always gonna be unbreakable

Newsflash, I'm causing a commotion
Jump back, I'm poetry in motion,
I'm fine, you can't deny

I'm unbreakable, unstoppable, I'm invincible
C'mon bring it to me, cuz I'm always gonna be unbreakable
Reliable, undeniable
Come on give it to me, cuz I'm always gonna be unbreakable

Unstoppable, I'm invincible, you're gonna bring it to me
Cuz I'm always gonna be unbreakable
Reliable, undeniable
Come on give it to me, cuz I'm always gonna be unbreakable

I will be unbreakable, unbreakable, I will be unbreakable
-I aquirred the lyrics as you asked?

" In this story Kisame is Naruto's Number one enemy, Can anyone guess why?"
No duh. His sword eats chakra!

loved it

Can't read any further. This Naruto is too pathetic. Ninjutsu is Naruto's bread & butter, without it he really is a laughable joke just like all his opponents say in canon. At least there he could spam certain techniques. The idea of Naruto actually having the finesse to win a fair fight when he's just as much of a buffoon as canon-Naruto, is beyond farfetched.

TEEEEAAAAADDDDDDYYYY

Godamn man. Now I want to get me some fucking kunai puffs.

By far your best story, it was actually pretty great.

Dear Jon, (lol sorry, just had to) I have to say that it saddens me a great deal to know that you haven't updated this story in almost 5 years... this is actually one of the very best Naruto/Hanabi fics that I've ever come across. I read the whole fic practically over the weekend, it was hard to put down lol. I just wanted to tell you how great the story has been so far. Hopefully, you find it in your heart to continue this work of art haha

Wow, your fight scenes are really good. And also, there are a few small little mistakes that are most likely just typos and errors from speed typing.

Your Naruto is a total ass. I am no going to mince words. But he is a cool ass, so its kinda okayish.

Inner bitchy fangirl: You will update, right? RIGHT! Cause if you don't I will rip your spine out and beat you with it. Kyahahahaha!

And its been several years you ************* ******* ****** *****!

Me: Ehehe, ignore her. *sweatdrop*

Kami have mercy- way to send the creepy Snake-pedo a present- practically gift wrapped. 'A Uchiha and a main branch Hyuuga? Kabuto you shouldn't have.'

blargh this is not my style can't read it any more

Remove certain mans genitals and beat him to death with them. " Sasuke finished darkly. lol