OMG I could cry just thinking about that ah... Obi-wan and Ani as actual brothers I never thought of that aw...

Very good.

obi-wan's his brother?

Ok, a little lost here on family ties. Yeah, no idea who is related to who here in this fic, but overall I liked it. Also the quote "Don't have name", I dunno, it just sorta stuck with me. Don't ask, I'm weird. Anyway, I liked it. Just don't get some of it.

That was excellent. Great twist to how things went. Obi-Wan as Shmi's son and Anakin just happened to come to her. This was really well written, it had a bittersweet beauty in it. Thank you!

Good start! Please continue! But I'm either having a blonde moment or am really confused, who is the speaker, Obiwain's mother, and who is Obi's brother, anakin?lol im so lost!

Hey, this is good! Are you going to make it longer? Please do!