I enjoyed this story, good job on it! Maybe you should write a chapter two or a sequel ... What would happen if Harry found the paper? Assuming Hermione doesn't burn it =).

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wow i love this its really good well done,lolxoxoxoxoxo

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Good work!

Ah, after HBP you don't see too many H/Hr fics, but the ones you find are astounding...

You did a wonderful job; Hermione's jounral sounded like something she would actually say, and the descriptions you used were tasteful and explanitory without weighing the story down.

Good job!

that was really good

aw...that was so cute! I like the way you put in all of Hermione's affections for Harry and how she only did tnose things to make his jealous. That was so good!

I must agree that HBP was the worst fanfiction I've ever read...and this is one of the best. I have a feeling one of these days you'll be a better writer than me...

BEAUTIFUL. Okay I think you're such a SMASHING writer; now if only you could continue this story! Haha it does show loads of potential, and yeah, Harry/Hermione PWNS, so! If you could, continue the story, or something!
I love how you wrote Hermione, it sounds like something she would say. The twist about how she was 'using' Ron during the 6th year was ingenious to, when I read HBP I was so let down by the Ron/Hermione plot):
CONTINUE WRITING! You rock.

NOT BAD, NOT BAD AT ALL. This story has potential, i could be your beta reader if you want, i'd be more than happy to help you out. Let me know, look me up and get my email.

This is a really good plot, and I happen to agree with you on Hermione liking Harry. I personally think she always has. Keep posting because you'll keep my attention.

aw... thats so... sweet and sad at the same time... aw... aw... AW...

superb job =)

aww thats cute!! I think u should continue!most of the time i dont go for H/Hr fanfics but this one sounds good! Continue!!