did u make that poem up? if u did ur good at poems!!:)

I really like your poem. It sounded true, or I mean, it sounded like Hiwatarti(or that's what I think) Your poem was very beautiful! I liked it!=)

That was amazing! Almost everybody writes fantastic on and you are not an exception!

so sad...(hee hee)i like your poem, i'll read anything, but Ashley still dosen't understand...she wants Satoshi to die.

anyways, it was a good poem, but the last line doesn't rhyme. (I'm SO sorry, i'm picky like that, plz don't hate me)