This story is good, and the pun was funny( even though it wasn't intended) XD, anyway please make the story longer...thats all, please write some more ...:3

O.O I think Sheena went a little...overboard...*nervous laugh* Anyway, this is really good!

great awsome fic! get presea and lloyed together soon, m like unable to wait. well hope u update soon

Yes! Thank you for starting a worthwhile LloydxPresea fan-fic...Genis and presea get all the attention but I know lots of people would also love her to get with Lloyd. Excellent jealousy factors which, by using the first person perspective, are presented very effectively! Looking forward to the next chapter!

:* :x I loved Sheena's outburst! :D XD :D I blinked.

i think this will be a rly good story, hope u update soon!

Oh, uncommon pairing! Whoo!

A little advice: try to keep the characters a little more in character. It wasn't bad, exactly, just a tiny bit off. Presea would never hate Colette or Zelos for ruining her chances/moment with Lloyd. Sheena is the one who would be sayind, "Stupid Zelos!" So, before you post a chapter, always run through it and make sure the characters are acting how they would in the game.

The toughest thing about fanfiction is being IC... so don't worry too much. It's still good, anyway! _ Continue soon.

Poor Presea...

Presea: You care about me?

Of course I do. Here. *hands Presea one of my new paper fans* Go have the time of your life.

Presea: Thank you. *looks for Lloyd*

Ok, now that's done, update soon!_

Grr. Stupid Colette getting kidnapped at a time like this.