Wow, you killed me. just joking, you need to make the 3rd one ASAP! Please *puppy dog eyes*
Brett

I love this story it is AWESOME. I can't wait until the sequel to this sequel. lol

Yay! A third of this chapter is dedicated to me! yes... I feel so special...thanks for updating! I look forward to more!

DramaticAngel here,

I still can't believe he got shot.

Wow, i didn't see that comeing ! can't waite for the next chapter ! hope you up-date soon !

Holy S-H-I-T! He got shot! He got shot! damn...

You're mean...my best friend just died, and I was hoping reading some stories would cheer me up... I hate you!

Just kidding! lol! I got you good rookie! keep updating! :P

Brett was my favorite character :(

YAY! Soda and Mary still together. YOu followed my advice. I'm glad that you thought of killing Brett off. Wow, now it really is like a soap opera. lol

great chapter, this story keeps getting more intressing ! hope you up-date soon !1 can't waite

Aww, Mary and Soda. That's a hell of a lot better than MaryXJohnny or MaryXBrett.

aw...I LOVE IT! I don't want her with johnny, but I like the idea with soda, great job!

Are you still doing the whole idea I gave you if so, I like that you added Soda in her picture. OH, I love the idea of SodaXMary

No make them get back together! NONONONONONO BRETT AND MARY~ BRETT AND MARY~ COME ON! Anyway I love it, a cliffhanger, your worse than the people who write the soap operas!

I think she should endded up with Johnny in the end ! Can't waite for an up-date ! hope you up-date soon !

very dramatic, i like