I'm crying... It is... No, I am just crying... That's all I can say about this masterpiece...

I think you got him perfectly - he wouldn't admit how he feels without some sort of huge apocalypse or with no one being able to hear it. Great story.

This was beautiful! This is exactly the way I picture him to be. He is torn between his duty and his heart and you really captured that perfectly here. Great job!

Great! I love B & WW Fanfics!

I love it!

More!

Nicely done. Good imagery. Evocative without being heavy handed.