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Reviews For: Alpha to Omega - Reviews: Page 1 of 6

DSDragon
2008-08-08
ch 6,
abuseI wish you would continue this story. It's very good. Even though it hasn't been updated in two years, I'm adding it to my story alert list, just in case. :)
nomad62
2008-03-01
ch 1,
abuseGreat story, I see you are still posting some stories so I hold out hope for more of this one.
JustAGirl24
2007-09-26
ch 6,
abuseWow... this story is truly beautiful. I'm sure you've put it on hold or abandoned it, seeing as it's been so long since you last updated, but I hope you resume it someday.

(I am living proof that a three-year hiatus does not mean a story remains incomplete! :)
Hai aieru
2007-09-22
ch 1,
abusethis is written exactly as the characters would act. and you got River's way of talking down pat
Bergerac
2007-07-18
ch 6,
abuseYou should finish this story because I like it a lot and I am sad that there hasn't been an update in a long time. Please update! I don't have much to offer but I will give you my devotion if you continue this amazing story!
be'etlh
2007-06-20
ch 6,
abuseI need more of this story right now! Pretty pretty please?
xxBuffyfreakxx
2007-06-13
ch 6,
abuseIm really liking this fic please keep it up.
TheShoelessOne
2007-04-26
ch 6,
abuseWell hey, I seem to have stumbled upon your fanfic! I know I've fallen into the rut of "oh, I'll update tomorrow" and trust me, this is one of those fics that simply needs updating. Your style is dead-on, and the dialogue is absolutely spot-on to the characters. I feel like a late-comer to all this, but I enjoyed reading this so much that when I hit the wall I felt a little empty. I really hope you choose to continue this, and I know circumstances can fly in your face when you least expect it, but you've managed to single-handedly convert me to a Rayne fan. Congratulations on the fic so far, and good luck with the (I hope) imminent updates. Your fan!
Callea
2007-02-26
ch 5,
abuseThis is wonderful. You've done such a great job with characterization, especially Jayne. Please, please update soon.
curlingsmoke
2007-02-04
ch 6,
abuseI love his idea! You write the entire crew really in-character, 'specially River and Jayne - I love their quiet moments together. It's been some time, but I hope you return to this for an update! Wonderful job so far :)

-Karys
rbquin
2007-01-30
ch 6, anon.
abuseI really enjoyed this. Did you finish it?
ren3017
2007-01-01
ch 6,
abuseOh Buddha! This is amazing! I couldn't tell you how many times you had me in tears but the gift Zoe gave River was the clincher.

Are you going to finish this?*prays*

'Cause I will be here waiting with bells on!

Can't wait to read more!

Ren
Tallera
2006-08-15
ch 6, anon.
abuseWow... :O This is amazing. Very in-character, but still the developing relationship is totally believable.

Any plans to update soon (pretty please)? :D
oh boy
2006-07-17
ch 6, anon.
abuseplease oh please do what the evils of television production didn't allow and finish these stories! They were amazing. I know twenty chapters is a lot to asked, but I wouldn't be asking if you hadn't promised. Your stories are SO good that they pull me to the edge of madness. If you don't plan on finishing any time soon, I would like to say: thank you. because they were SO happy. My tear-stained cheeks would beg to differ, but they just made me happy, so thank you. Your writing is AMAZING.
Siorsa
2006-06-13
ch 6,
abuseI really hope you do plan on finishing this story! I'd be interested to see how things play out. Jayne and River are so completely in-character it's eerie! The way you portray Jayne as so very resistant to all of this is very believable, and River really does come across as entirely unpredictable (as she should!). The dreams were creepy - but brilliant.

And I have to say - your diction is perfect!
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