does she really need to say "joe" after every sentence, i mean were pretty sure whos she is talking to lol

Nooo... I say never hold back when it comes to writing a fanfic. Helps to express yourself through your work when you let it all flow. Admittedly Joe/Maggie aren't on my top ten list, tho. Not bad! Not bad at all. :)

Good story Joe and Maggie are my faveourite dark Shadows couple. You could have toned down the sex though

It was nice. Definitly a nicer spin to Maggie/Joe romance. It was a shame that it ended so badly on the show.

Well okay yep that was good cause I am sure you know true love does not equal the end to virginity :)