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voodooDRUG 2008-07-02 ch 7,	abuseI loved this, i think it would be brillant if u made a sequel where he finds out about her cancer, or instead, give me permission to make one?
miss mcGonagle 2007-04-22 ch 7,	abusehappy sigh No gimicks, just plain romance. I like that. This was a great fic - very satisfying. ;)
josiris 2007-03-30 ch 7,	abuseReally nicely done :) I thought the way kara was acting was hilarious.
carolann 2006-12-05 ch 7,	abuseI really liked your story. I love Bill and Laura as a couple. Thanks so much for sharing.
Mariel3 2006-09-23 ch 7,	abuseOkay, I've happily finished reading this, and my opinion is still high. I like the easy relationship you built between Adama and Roslin, and the dinner scene was nicely handled. I liked Bill's perception that Lee was at that very moment telling Kara, and that by morning it would be all over the ship. Thanks for writing this. I'm very sad that you haven't felt inspired to write more BSG, but thanks for this.
Mariel3 2006-09-23 ch 5,	abuseYou wrote this quite a while ago, and for some reason it doesn't look as though I ever reviewed it. I am now, however, because I like correcting my mistakes, and this story is just too much fun not to thank you for it. You're very good with both humour and quiet sexual tension - and with those little details that enable the reader to fully picture what you're writing. Example:(from a previous chapter) "Laura smoothed her fingers over his jacket, gently pushing his collar against his neck where it had curled a little from the days wear. She felt him swallow as he spoke, felt his pulse when her fingers touched his skin." This was totally awesome. And in this chapter, the dialogue with Kara and Lee was also perfectly done - quick, witty, and beautifully in character. Excellent stuff. Now I'm on my way to read the rest again...
KittyX1981 2006-08-31 ch 1,	abusenice
divadarling 2006-08-12 ch 7,	abuseSuch a cute story! Thanks for the great read! Laura and Adama are the best and you got them down perfectly in the story. I especially like Roslin always playing with her glasses, very in character for her. I like how you included Lee in the story too. Very funny and sweet. Nice job!
piepretzelngreg 2006-06-03 ch 7,	abuseyay! that was such a good story! ^^ i loved it! ^^ it has me smiling at the end!
irine18 2006-01-17 ch 7,	abuseVery good! The characterizations and dialogue were spot on. Hope to see more from you.
Lattelady 2006-01-13 ch 7,	abuseWhat a wonderful story. I can't believe I've missed it up until now. You do a great job of writing Laura/Adama. Please wrire more stories. I also like the way you have Lee and Kara interacting with the other couple.
theDragonStar 2005-10-13 ch 7,	abusesigh So cute, and perfect.
adafrog 2005-10-10 ch 7,	abuseI love Adama/Roslin. They are so sweet. And, we got some freak out Lee time in there, which is always fun. :D
DeeRich 2005-10-09 ch 7,	abuseNice. I like this story. I would really like to read one with a plot written while you are awake. (I think it would be excellent.) nit-picks: "minds of things for a short time." off things? "his glasses long been replaced." his glasses had long been replaced? "I wanted to ask you about the rumours we’ve been hearing about.” I don't think you need the "about." "It’s the how idea that my father and the President, are…" I don't think you need the "how." about our individual status’ You don't need the apostrophe. :-)
DeeRich 2005-10-09 ch 6,	abuseOh, poor Lee. Moving on to the end! nit-picks: "He paused momentarily to raised her hand to his cheek" I think you mean "raise." "a little idol gossip" idle gossip. "with a challenged eye." Huh? Do you mean challenging eye?

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