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Sir Edward
2009-09-21 . chapter 15
Wow Wow WOW!
I can not get over how awesome this story is!!
Here's to Sasuke-kun changing his attitude!
I hope an update comes soon, though it would be understandable if it wasn't... Your chapters are so long!!

Great chapter,
*~Sir Edward~*
Deritine
2009-08-22 . chapter 13
Completely non-important comment, but most crustaceans have a solid er... 'top' and lots of openings underneath that are good for ripping them apart. Gods be damned... now I want me some crab! M...
Deritine
2009-08-22 . chapter 4
I haven't watched a ton of Gundam WWing... what was up with Duo's reaction to Faith RE: the jacket?
Stiehl
2009-07-16 . chapter 15
I am honestly surprised that they haven't tried to kill each other yet, lol. Hope to see a new chapter soon!
killing u with umbrellas
2009-05-27 . chapter 15
its a pretty interesting story. if you're ever going to update, i'd love to read it.
necessarily-anonymous
2009-05-23 . chapter 15
i was recced this fic from a friend in y gall, and omg im so glad i read this!

at first when i saw Buffy Naruto cross over, i was like, what? no way.. but i read the first para...and then the next.. and 15 chapters went by in a second. your fic is seriously addictive..lol.

the originality, and the characterisation impressed me from the get go. i loved this. keep writing. ^_^
Crystal Cat-chan
2009-04-14 . chapter 15
Now, I am convinced that there are two types of crossovers in the world, those that fail completely at meshing the different worlds and characters, and those that succeed so completely they feel like they happened. This, happily, is one of those rare gems that seems to line everything up neatly and completely and leaves me sitting on the edge of my seat, just waiting to see what happens next. It's so wonderfully thought out and so well considered, every character just moves right. The situation is fantastic and none of the three are strangers to the fantastic, but at the same time their confusion, their unknowing in this new world they find themselves in, just makes it work on every aesthetic level. I adore the interactions, I adore Duo for pushing too hard, and Faith and her mile of legs pushing just hard enough, and Sasuke wanting so bad to have friends and people to care about, but not being able to allow himself them, his carefully guarded thoughts about his team and the village just broke my heart. I think Faith and Duo will be good for him, because it's always nice to know that you're not the only one, there are other people out there who might not know everything, but they understand what is being suffered. This entire story just clicked for me, in that rare way that I don't find many stories clicking. The world, the characters, everything is so wonderfully put together. Thank you so much for writing this. I hope to read more soon.
hamiechi
2009-02-04 . chapter 4
Oh,geez,it is too vulgar for me,i cant stand!i'm only 18 trapped in 12 year old body!!and i'm girl and...ugh,forget that,i hate something like that,horny teenagers*sighs*,i know you're american and way older than me,indonesian is different,doesnt talk bout sex blatantly. You have bloody good idea!!i like it,duoxsasuke*drools*my two beloved charas!kya!but i dont think duo is like that,horny bla bla bla,you know,i know what horny meant a couple mounths ago,ch.i like how you portrayed sasuke,it's fine to me,but oh allah~~you ruin my duo!!
Qem
2009-01-03 . chapter 15
I'm enjoying the way you balance between the three characters with their personalities and strengths.
wind dancer1981
2008-12-18 . chapter 15
I like your story and its working for me all of it so keep going
Asterisks
2008-12-09 . chapter 15
I didn't think this would work but. . . I'm at the final chapter posted and I want more! I think the info is good, I don't think I've ever watched Duo Maxwell's series but I get enough of his character through your description. I little more on the plot for the next chapter would be nice. I look forward to an update.
Ironbear
2008-11-27 . chapter 15
Wow. Pretty good. Not familiar with the other characters, but you seem to have captured post-Chosen Faith fairly nicely. And it makes my fingers itch to try a similar styled crossover, which is always the mark of a good story.
RandomTopic
2008-11-27 . chapter 15
Gah, the new place to click to review keeps messing me up. -_-; Good fic. I really want to see them all land in one of the worlds at some point. Preferably Duo's, mostly to see the reaction of the other pilots and such.
KeiGinya
2008-11-04 . chapter 15
Sasuke's reminding me of Shampoo from Ranma lately, especially that outburst he had a couple chapters back. It's probably the pidgin English he's speaking. The image actually amuses me, since his English isn't sophisticated enough to carry through his personality. I mean, the worst insult he has is 'stupid', which is sorta cute -- a disgruntled, teen Sasuke saying 'you are too too stupid'. :laughing her head off:
hakuisagirl
2008-10-23 . chapter 15
you really should write for a living.
i really enjoy all of your stories. i'm not familiar with
duo's story but you byought him to life for me. same with the wrede story line before, and way of the apt manager.
THANK YOU for sharing your gift with us.
:)
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