um...wow.
I can't even express how...wow. You really went above and beyond where that challenge was concerned. Amazing stuff. There were several lines I would quote that made me smile, but I'll just say that the whole thing was incredibleand leave it at that.

Loved the story. I love Bill and Laura as a couple. Thanks so much for sharing.

This story was perfect. Realistic, I mean. If ever Laura and Adama were together, this would be the way how. You captured all the nuances in their characters perfectly. I hope you write a sequel, but since it's a challenge you probally won't.

Damn.