Comforting. Yet odd

:D Loved this.

I wept when I read this!

OMG

My heart is broken. Thank you.

What a wonderful story. I could feel for both Zoe and River, Zoe thinks with with her head and while River does the same, she always feels things other people don't. It was so sweet to see River trying to comfort Zoe. Great work!

Smile!

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I thought that Icarus was stupid, unable to control himself.

Heart-wrenchingly beautiful. Wonderful fic.

Greek mythology and...a pregnancy? It really doesn't get much better than that. Lovely imagery and dialogue and Zoe characterization.

I miss Wash.

i thought the saddest thing about the movie was that wash died. then i remembered the episode of the show where they were arguing about having children and it only got sadder. seems you were thinking the same. good job! _

Beautiful.

Just when I thought I would vomit if I read yet another "Wash may be dead but he left Zoe pregnant" story (I swear to god, 90% of the post-Serenity stories end up with Zoe pregnant), I hit this one. Yes, I'm slightly annoyed that it falls into that 90% category, but it is one that is actually well-written, so I can forgive you for it. You captured River and Zoe's voices perfectly and the sorrow that Zoe feels (and as a result, that I felt while reading) perfectly.

You did an excellent job at taking a cliche and turning it into something great.

This was gorgeous.

Beautifully poignant, and with an excellent River voice. Very well done!

So poetic

How sad is it that you made me cry in the first paragraph? This totally got to me:

"'Don’t fly too close to the sun!’ he had warned the boy. ‘Stay in the middle, where it’s safe. I don’t want you to burn too bright or too fast. Only the good die young.’ ”

I must remember to thank my fried for telling me to read your Firefly fics.