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Verbal-Enigma 3/14/09 . chapter 3
loved it! yeah! Reno agnsty lovin it!
Vixen Rouge 12/12/05 . chapter 3
sorry for my bad English I'm French yo-

wtf! you killed both Elena and Tseng! (why are they burried in the Forgotten Capital? Was it their last will!). I wouldn't have expect Tseng to react this way at Elena's death, isn't he the leader of the Turk? I found him a little OoC... And the appearance of Elena's ghost make me think about rumors to revive Aerith involving her ghost...

Odd story...

Vixen Rouge
Rude-of-the-Turks 11/7/05 . chapter 1
its good... really
Roland Knight 11/4/05 . chapter 3
why oh why does everyone would think vincent is a happy camper! oh well other then that, its very good. so keep up the good work.

J
Duo-No-Micho 10/23/05 . chapter 3
What I don't get gratitude for the work I put in? *pouts in corner*

On another note, I do believe this is the longest chapter ever that you have wrote, a few spelling mistakes, but it was a good chapter.

10 out 10 All things considered.
Hey its me Rufus 10/22/05 . chapter 3
iT was fuck great
Nando the RPS King 10/22/05 . chapter 3
I'm surprised I didn't spot this earlier. Excellent work, very emotionally charged writing.
Noma the Fox 10/21/05 . chapter 3
Oh, I still think that's a good story. @w@ I still kept thinkin' that Reno was gonna die.. then I thought that he and Elena were gonna have some 'touchy' moment, but instead the had a casual conversation. Me likes a lot!
Will-kun 10/21/05 . chapter 3
wow that was great escpecially the trippign part hehe. I love the ending! it was a very very good ff7 fic kai-chan

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Noma the Fox 10/9/05 . chapter 2
Definately liked that one... And honestly, I don't care too much for Final Fantasy. xD Poor little Reno.. always with the abuse for you!
Duo-no-micho 10/6/05 . chapter 2
Wow kai this is the fastest update you have ever done. YAY *throws confeti in the air*

9-10
Will-kun 10/6/05 . chapter 2
Yay for chocbo heads! That was a super quick update, im glad it was too _. If i ever see a reno plushie hes yours. until next time Kai-chan

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Mattxors 10/4/05 . chapter 1
well, it's not the best. I, expecially, liked, the, unnecessary, use, of, commas, and such. kai really needs a competant proofreader to look over her wrighting before she submits it (not 'hey *name of proofreader here* look at my story and tell me if I gots any errors in it, oh and I already posted it so even if you do find an error I can't fix it')
Will-kun 10/4/05 . chapter 1
Poor Reno, everyone hates him now..:(.Good chapter hopefully reno doesnt go and die then Midgar wouldnt have the number one troublemaker and Rude would be all alone

*passes krads hair out to everybody*

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Dark Wings Of Darkness 10/4/05 . chapter 1
Another great story! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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