 Elma Mar 2006-11-29 . chapter 1I clicked your story randomly and ended up with a smile on my face. It would be an understatement to say I loved it! The last line was absolutely genius. Tristan and Joey...in a laundromat. Not bad...not bad at all. ;)
Peace! |
 Rowan and Sakura 2006-05-10 . chapter 1Rowan: God, I love Buddyshipping. It's the purest kind of love, next to that "of one dead drunk for another". (That's just a quote from the poem "Love" by...anonymous, I think.) Actually, the whole "moron" thing really reminded me of that line. Both last lines (of the poem and of this story) are what make them, because they are both so...spectacularly funny. And for this story, it provides a wonderful mental image.
I've actually read this story a long time ago, I think. I'm glad I didn't review then, because I get to read it a second time. |
 emif 2006-03-18 . chapter 1This is done wonderfully.
I love the urban setting and casual way you characterize. The plot was fast moving but not abrupt. It also reminds me of the few good fanfics I used to read.
And a wonderful addition to an ignored pairing. |
 fightingcomet 2006-03-13 . chapter 1lmao...wow, that was good...great fic! ^_^ |
 Silent Mind 2006-01-11 . chapter 1Aww that was cute! ^__^ Nice work!! *Two thumbs up*
~Silent |
 Misura 2005-12-21 . chapter 1A story that left me with a grin and a general 'feel-good'-feeling, stammering as that last may sound. I especially loved the way you wrote their interaction (as best buddies, and more) and the way you set the mood for the scene. A highly enjoyable reading-snack. ^-^ |
 Ryua Malfoy 2005-11-22 . chapter 1Ah, the wonders of a laundromat... It's acutally a surprisingly sexy public area, as these things go... and cleaner than say a park, or a bathroom... |
 dragonlady222 2005-10-05 . chapter 1I really like this pairing. If it's not a one shot update soon, please. |
 The Long Name Ending In Cookie 2005-10-05 . chapter 1I love the ending line. Excellent.
The change of pace right at the end was cool, too.
Buddyshipping is so cute ^_^ |
 purpleushi 2005-10-04 . chapter 1soo funny! I really liked it... |
 flamethrowerqueen 2005-10-04 . chapter 1*grins* Not bad, not bad at all. Very original. Heh, short and sweet, and your writing style fit the pairing. Me like very much. |
 leaf the invisible 2005-10-04 . chapter 1omg ...that was great XD -giggles- oh wow...i liked it XD
~Leaf~ |