Good story, maybe have a conclusion about San and Ashitaka. But anyway, it is good.

Woo-hoo! Yes, I like it!

i really like your writing style. it's so calm, sensible and realistic. you keep the characters in character as well. i've read all your kare kano and your flcl ff and i think that they're great. please keep it up :)

This was an incredible story. I think you truly captured the emotions of each character with perfection. I look forward to reading your next story.

A beautifully written continuation of the film, with good characterization. Keep it up.