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| Sakina the Fallen Angel 2005-10-17 ch 1, | abuseYou have a unique instantly recognizable style of writing that I really like- either that or I've been reading too many of your fics! Lol. I don't actually know too much about Lady Illusion's history, but you've made this very believable. I think you portrayed her relationship with Ace very well too- I never saw them as being chummy in their past, more like a love-hate chemistry. Nice way to end the fic too. Sakina x |