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| toothchick 2008-01-21 ch 37,  | abuseI just found this story and read the whole thing!! I wanted to review, but I just couldn't stop reading! I have read many fanfics and several with new characters added to the team, but Alyssa is the first character that seemed to fit in from the get-go!! In fact, I really would love to see her as a character on the show--she seems to be a perfect complement to all of the other characters. |
| OokamiNoArissa 2006-10-15 ch 1, | abuseomg MY name is Alyssa, spelled JUST like that, cool |
| puplover77 2006-09-16 ch 37, | abusei loved every bit of it its not even funny.i cant believe its over i loved it so much i cant say that enough i loved it so much. u are so talented and i love it and u for writing it.ok so thanks for the wondeful story.good luck with future writing endeavours. |
| Manhattan SVU 2006-09-15 ch 37, | abuseThis was a great chapter. The baby's name is so cute. I just loved it! I'm so sad now that this story is over. I would absolutely LOVE if you wrote either a sequel or another story involving Nick/Alyssa. You got me hooked, what can I say? I really hope to see another story from you soon ;) Keep up the great work! |
| J Money SBI 2006-09-14 ch 37, | abuseGood story... but I expected so much more YoBling! and I didn't get it... sad face. |
| Future Miss CSI60 2006-09-14 ch 37, | abuseAH! Make a second book! PLEASE...*Sigh* I can't beleive they eloped... *sigh* now you HAVE to make a part two to the book...XD PLEASE!! XD I'd marry the book if I could...but i don't think I can... |
| LaLa-036 2006-09-14 ch 37, | abuseI loved this story! Please do another, whether it be a sequel or another Alyssa/Nick story. Publish soon! |
| im a k 2006-09-14 ch 37, | abuseI'm so relieved that the baby is okay! If possible, you should totally use her for another story. I'm sure it will be just as awesome as this one! |
| odeepblue 2006-09-14 ch 37, | abusei loved it, i really wish you would continue now that nicks life is good, i would love for you to concentrate on the other couples, maybe give this GSR junkie (lol) something to read about ;) totally loved it ;) |
| anneruhland 2006-09-13 ch 36, | abusetouching scene. I hope that she says yes. |
| Manhattan SVU 2006-09-12 ch 36, | abuseOh my goodness. I really hope the baby will be healthy soon and I would really like to see if she'll have a name anytime soon... =) And you totally, practically killed me with the ending. I think I need an oxygen mask or something, because that is so awsome and I am so excited to see what happens next. You HAVE to update soon. |
| odeepblue 2006-09-12 ch 36, | abuseoh my god, that was heartmelting, i hope she doesn't feel to guilty or blames her self, i hope she says yes. |
| Future Miss CSI60 2006-09-12 ch 36, | abuse*cries and dabs eyes* damn...*sniffle* usually when they warn me that I might cry, I never cry...*sniffle and wipes tears* you're the first to actually say I might cry, then I cry...*breaks out into full on crying* SHE BETTER MARRY HIM! |
| Manhattan SVU 2006-09-10 ch 35, | abuseOkay, first off, I am SO glad that you updated. I was really missing this story. And then of course, you have to udpate ASAP. I really want to see if Alyssa and the baby are going to be okay. This chapter was short and sweet and addictive. |
| odeepblue 2006-09-10 ch 35, | abuseoh boy, i hope he gets there in time ;) |