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| Jumpingbeans480 2008-07-16 ch 1,  | abuseThat was pretty cute and funny. There was a little bit of parody in Sakura's behaviour. |
| micah.n10 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseVery cute. Of course they'd never deny it ;) True love can never be denied! Yosh! I'll just go and hide now... :mumble: can't believe i said 'Yosh' :shakes head in denial: |
| Super Supreme Commander 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abuseAw! Sweet! (Hugs Kakashi) He's mine! (hisses) |
| SongoftheDarquePhoenix 2007-10-29 ch 1, | abuseThis made me smile manicaly! |
| Minami's Mask 2007-03-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is perfect. I agree with you, the fanfic ends there. The rhythm you give to your stories, the cleanness with which you choose the right sentences to tell your story are, like, so cool! If you wish to add something, try it in another story, because it is perfect the way it is. Most excelent job! |
| Temari-chu 2006-03-22 ch 1, | abuseBEAUTIFUL IT WAS AMAZING WORDS CAN NOT DESCRIBE IT! |
| Miali 2005-11-17 ch 1, | abuseWonderful! Ka'shi and 'Ruka are just too cute to keep apart, ne? Great job for your first Naruto fiction. You kept the character quite well, and it was definately believable. ((Hm. I need to throw more team seven into my fictions -- Thanks for the inspiration. XD)) Please write another KakaIru soon! X3 |
| seshygirl04 2005-11-12 ch 1, | abuseOu, interesting... I wonder... You can really write characters in character, I really admire it! Please add more to this story! |
| Kyra Windwood 2005-10-27 ch 1, | abuseBAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! (dies laughing) |
| MeeLee 2005-10-06 ch 1, | abuseThat's cute. Great job for a first fic in this category. Keep it up! -MeeLee |
| animegirl9001 2005-10-06 ch 1, | abuseaw That was really adorable like ME! haha, Yes! |
| Azamiko 2005-10-06 ch 1, | abuseHaha, the end was funny!! ^_^ |
| Black Ice 2005-10-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw! True love is a beautiful thing. Points for Sakura for noticing it. Sakura: :bows: Anyway, it was cute. Though Iruka doth suck at lying. (Was that used right?) ^.^; |
| thaddeus t. 2005-10-05 ch 1, | abusekick ** ^^ so cute. 'id never deny my love for you.' so blunt xDD |