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FireNationFreak
2007-05-05
ch 3,
abuseoh my gosh! that was SO good! you are a total genius mastermind!! PLEASE WRITE MORE CHAPTERS! please?? (*wimpers and gives puppy-dog face*) pwease??
Fantastic Bouncy Girl
2006-06-27
ch 11, anon.
abuseHey, sorry this took so long... I couldn't get on for long stretches for a few days...
Anyho, decent chapter... heheh yes I know that feeling of not being able to resist writing more. (looks around) even when one is SUPPOSED to be doing other things... sheepish grin-.

The cliffy's not bad - though not as mean as others - pHEW, need a break from those - and I love that they're figuring out what's going on. I can't saty and ramble on for long becuase I'm supposed to be off in a few mintues time.. it's late. But as always, nice going! xD

-FBG
Kats02980416
2006-06-24
ch 11,
abuseAww boy, a cliffhanger. Its that torment of both Danny and Sam being apart and not together. I totally feel for the two of them, but I also truly believe in their strong connection, that strong bond, and their love for one another is so strong, that their relationship can be fixed. Yes, its severely damaged rightnow, but things can be mended. Finally, Sam is seeing for the first time, what has been happening. The manipulation of breaking them apart, so Danny's powers could be taken. They were both being used. Thanks for Jazz for helping solve this disaster. Someone needed to open their eyes to this scheme. Now the mystery caller, creepy. How will Sam save Danny and vice versa? They just both get a grip. Ghosts are involved but also something else.
Hanone
2006-06-08
ch 10,
abuseTHIS IS MY FAVORITE CHAPTER. Rawr. And not just because I finally made sense of it -winks-

Danny is in trouble. O...

Dude, he should've just used his ghostly wail and shoot them through the wall. XD But then Sam still would've been in trouble and died in the end. Ah, oh well. It was probably Oeartle and Eltreao who made some go in the "tragic accident" all along though. Danny's been jipped. In the end I bet Simara from The Ring comes out from lurking in the shadow and eats them all. xD Except Danny, because HE IS MINE. X3

XxFadedxMemoriesxX
Fantastic Bouncy Girl
2006-06-06
ch 10, anon.
abuseOh! Oh! very well done.. I liked this one - and I esPECIALLY like that we now have three chaps in order... it makes more sense.

And I am MOST glad that I'll FINALLY get to read Sunshine Circle's finale! GEt it up get it up get it up! NOW! xD

Eheheh, sorry. Kinda hyper. Even though those boys on the bus really ** me off. Ha.

Eltraeo and Oaertle... devious... very devious - but that makes them all teh more intruiging and easier to hate. And Danny - of course he'd do anythign for Sam... and vice versa. YOu did great here - I await the next update - and finding out whatever the "key" is! Becuase that's the one part that still remains confusing. xP

-FBG
Kats02980416
2006-06-06
ch 10,
abuseDanny's always loved Sam, no matter what. Wow, love is stronger than anything and I think no matter what, its stronger then death. Danny's gotta be stronger than these crazy brothers. Those guys probably had a lot to do with separating Danny and Sam, elevating their emotions to dangerous levels. Its like they needed that anger to drive them to be powerful. I mean afterall Danny's powers must have grown overtime and is still growing. And I'm saying Sam also truly loves Danny underneath all the anger. Yes, you're angry and hurt, but nothing is perfect and no relationship can be perfect. Its always gonna have its faults, but its the challenges and the journey together will help overcome all. You face it together head on. Danny and Sam bestfriends to more have faced it all. This might be their biggest challenge yet, but you just dont give up on the other. I love how in this chapter shows how much Danny is willing to give up for Sam. Its so heartfelt. I think the key those 2 crazy villains are referring to on who they need more than Danny is Sam. Afterall, those two loverbirds are connected. Cant wait til your next update.
Hanone
2006-06-01
ch 9,
abuseOkay... my tiny brain is starting to register what's happening. xD They fight, they fight some more, they make up, but in the process off kaking up they fight again. BUT the Sam he got a fight with in the third time might not have really been Sam at all, and maybe an illusion by the dudes who's names can be flipped around to spell each other's. xD I think I'm missing a fight or few in there, but oh well. Suck it up. xD

Get your ecto butt in gear. Grrawr.

XxFadedxMemoriesxX
Song of the Hawk
2006-06-01
ch 9,
abuseAh... I REMEMBER that last part! Saw it in a sneak you gave somewhere earlier on. Poor Danny. and yes you do make Sam sound less evil now - rather pitiful actually.

And you know what? It's getting less confusing now that mroe chaps have been done, so i'm not gonna scream at ya again. xPP As usual, well done.

-FBG

PS: You might want to take another look at this para though - seems you got in a few grammar mistakes/ typos.

Was she really some cold hard witch that could care less about feeling something than caring about how she acted around others? If she had the choice…would she have the strength and stamina to fight every single ghost that attacked someone who wouldn’t even show their gratitude for their saving? Did she appreciate anything Danny had done for, or had she ignored the great things he’d done for her and for others…despite him not being around and fighting... He was fighting.

That'd be all.
Kats02980416
2006-06-01
ch 9,
abuseVery very heartwrenching. Danny and Sam need to be together. Yes, that fight was ugly, but its doesn't mean you give up on the other. You make it work, if the heart really wants it to her work. For Danny and Sam, something is manipulating their hearts and minds forcing the two of them to bring about trivial errors of the other and causing conflict. Its like the evil force wants them to be apart for some reason. Someone wants Danny to suffer and be broken emotionally. I can still feel the love between the two. The fire still lingers and burns for the other. It takes two to cause a fight. There is not one true person at fault. Both are to blame for their current state of being separated and broken. Their love and be saved. Its a matter of them doing something about it and making that move to reconcile. Their hearts need to be at the same place.
Panic! I'm here
2006-05-31
ch 1, anon.
abuseI'm not reading the story till it has a chapter one
Slayer of Souls
2006-05-22
ch 8,
abusewoowwowo! that was greeat! encore encore! it was awesome possum for shure! way to go, yayas! i loved it, all the way, surpingsingly enough. okies ,well i gotta go, but wil talk to u laters. see ya!
Fantastic Bouncy Girl
2006-05-21
ch 8, anon.
abuseoh my... that was rough. Rough, but... good. The fist part seemed kinda abrupt - but otherwise... great and comlpetely... believable. Normally Sam and danny are pictured as such a perfect fluffy couple that nothign can go wrong... but you managed to turn it into such a... okay, believable fight. x)

Nice job. I await more - and I esPECIALLY await - FINALLy - the update to Love me x2! WHE!

Oh and did I say I liked thsi story too? Alot?

-FBG
Kats02980416
2006-05-21
ch 7,
abuseSee, there's regret and sorrow, and longing for what just had happened with Sam. Danny's totally feeling at lost without her. That villain who's running the show, is totally wicked, playing with Danny and Sam's hearts like that. Danny should be furious and figure out how to beat this guy. He's totally bad news bears and he defeated Danny, no problem. And now, his next Target is Sam. Great, how will she defeat this dude. That was funny how all the songs on all the radio stations, happened to reflect his feelings for Sam and all that has happened. Who's he kidding, he loves that girl. Danny has to grow up and just show that Danny Phantom confidence and win her back. I think Danny is always afraid to make that next step or first move. He's only bold and brave in his halfa form, but fails to promote that in his human state. There's his error there. Love how this story is mapped out like a puzzle. You dont know what will happen next and how it will fit within the story.
Kats02980416
2006-05-21
ch 8,
abuseBoy, was that one bad breakup. You can feel the intensity of their fight. One argument leading to one another, but if both parties were thinking straight, it seems to me throwing excuses after excuses to not be together, but more on Sam's part rather than Danny's. Also, what couple does not fight. You have to fight about something. I mean, fights are healthy in a relationship to survive and hey can add some spice to the relationship. If you agreed on everything single thing, the relationship would be boring and you'd end up parting ways. Yea, both Danny and Sam both said harsh things to one another and were cold to each other, but if you think about it, they are both truths to what was said. Isn't it the faults you point out to one another, shouldn't you love them more for admitting things like that. I mean yea, Danny is "clueless" on things say, feelings wise and Sam can be well..have to always be in the right. Also, I think, Danny seems to be the one holding on to their relationship more than Sam and Sam seems to be the one pushing him away from her. But both seem to be blinded by some higher power, manipulating their harmonious relationship. Cant wait how the rest of the story will unravel and what will repair their now shattered relationship. I mean yea, they cant go back to just being friends and they cant go forward afterall that has happened. They are inbetween things like your title says, but I think not is all bad as it really says. Those two have just got to get a grip, and think in their hearts what they still will feel for another, despite all that was said. So what, both got a dose of reality check of being in a relationship, but that doesnt say give up without a fight. I wonder if Tucker will intervene.
Celestial Moonshine
2006-05-20
ch 8,
abuseWell, I'm actually really seeing Sam as the enemy in this one. I mean, she acts hurt, and I can understand where her anger is coming from, but she's being extremely selfish.
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