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| PALE991 2008-08-12 ch 1, | abuseAWSOME FANFIC BY THE WAY I AM PALE99 ON XBOX LIVE AND I LIKE TO PLAY HALO 3 I AM ALREADY YOUR FRIEND ON XBOX LIVE MAYBE WE COULD PLAY SOME HALO3 |
| lostmoonchild 2006-02-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseI liked this story and I like the song. I didn't find any problems with it and ironically, this fanfic got me wanting to find the song and download it. |
| SamBlob 2005-10-09 ch 1, | abuseComment #1: Mistake in the lyrics: should read "She got the Mercedes bends." My source? The album cover. I have it here at home. Comment #2: No coherent story. It jumps all around. Comment #3: Thin. I seem to be reading a rash of thin, underdeveloped songfics lately. The story seems to be feeding from the song instead of movig with the song. Overall: It doesn't do justice either to "Code Lyoko" or to "Hotel California". |
| agehron 2005-10-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseBest CL story I've read, I'll check out your other fic. It's nice to know that there are people under 20 (like me)who still like the classics. |
| agehron 2005-10-07 ch 1, anon. | abusebesy CL fic I've read, and it's good to know that there are kids out there who still like the classics. |
| Travis 2005-10-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseHaha... I love Hotel California, great song. |
| Cold-Foxx 2005-10-05 ch 1, | abuseCool. At first I didn't get it, then I re-read it. I understand now. Great job. |
| Tekirai-chan 2005-10-05 ch 1, | abusewow, the song was very well chosen for this fanfiction. all the lines fit everything that happened in the story, grammer is all good, no spelling or punctuation errors.. putting this in my favourites due to being so undeniably well written. ;D |