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snaplappl21
2007-12-21 . chapter 1
cute :)
Cuban Sombrero Gal
2007-06-09 . chapter 1
Brilliant! I love this - snogging would beat cheese fondue anyday!
milkthepanda
2007-01-16 . chapter 1
Um...cute? ^_^; To be honest with you...I was pretty confused. What the heck is snogging? >.> Sorry - I'm not a huge Harry Potter fan. By the way, excellent dialogue one-shot. ^_^

- Caffeine Lover
serendipities
2006-09-17 . chapter 1
Man, I love these 'just dialogue' stories. Good job!
GoPS
2006-08-09 . chapter 1
...Why does she call him potter?
Nandini
2005-10-24 . chapter 1
very funny!
shadowydreamer
2005-10-15 . chapter 1
lols cheese fondue...
penguininpink
2005-10-10 . chapter 1
Oh, me likey!

Your dialogue flowed well. Each person's reactions seemed believable, and it made me grin. :D

Two things that I would criticize: First, you used "..." several times, and I personally don't care for that. As the entire fic was dialogue, I can't give you an alternative, but there you are. Secondly, why does Ginny call him Potter?

Besides those two things, it was a very enjoyable fic, and one you should be proud of.
PotterChick958
2005-10-09 . chapter 1
hahaha made me laugh. Funny story!
HarryluvsMoaningMyrtle
2005-10-06 . chapter 1
i liked this it was different from what you usually do which is totally cool, the only thing i didn't like was that ginny called harry, potter but it was still a great idea
OpalTears
2005-10-06 . chapter 1
ha that was really good, funny, cute, short and sweet! write more, i can't wait to read more of your fics! :)
sexy mammal
2005-10-05 . chapter 1
cheese fondue..riight, hee hee cute though
willowbabe
2005-10-05 . chapter 1
Umm, strange... and bizarre...

Where you craving Cheese fondue while writing this maybe?

It's very different. And odd. I like it though.

I also now have a craving for cheese fondue.
Dream Phantom
2005-10-05 . chapter 1
Cute.
AllIWannaDo
2005-10-05 . chapter 1
Aww...cute. What's with the Potter, though? You should write an all-dialogue ficlet about Lily and James. Lol!
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