 snaplappl21 2007-12-21 . chapter 1cute :) |
 Cuban Sombrero Gal 2007-06-09 . chapter 1Brilliant! I love this - snogging would beat cheese fondue anyday! |
 milkthepanda 2007-01-16 . chapter 1Um...cute? ^_^; To be honest with you...I was pretty confused. What the heck is snogging? >.> Sorry - I'm not a huge Harry Potter fan. By the way, excellent dialogue one-shot. ^_^
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 serendipities 2006-09-17 . chapter 1Man, I love these 'just dialogue' stories. Good job! |
 GoPS 2006-08-09 . chapter 1 ...Why does she call him potter? |
 Nandini 2005-10-24 . chapter 1 very funny! |
 shadowydreamer 2005-10-15 . chapter 1 lols cheese fondue... |
 penguininpink 2005-10-10 . chapter 1Oh, me likey!
Your dialogue flowed well. Each person's reactions seemed believable, and it made me grin. :D
Two things that I would criticize: First, you used "..." several times, and I personally don't care for that. As the entire fic was dialogue, I can't give you an alternative, but there you are. Secondly, why does Ginny call him Potter?
Besides those two things, it was a very enjoyable fic, and one you should be proud of. |
 PotterChick958 2005-10-09 . chapter 1hahaha made me laugh. Funny story! |
 HarryluvsMoaningMyrtle 2005-10-06 . chapter 1i liked this it was different from what you usually do which is totally cool, the only thing i didn't like was that ginny called harry, potter but it was still a great idea |
 OpalTears 2005-10-06 . chapter 1ha that was really good, funny, cute, short and sweet! write more, i can't wait to read more of your fics! :) |
 sexy mammal 2005-10-05 . chapter 1 cheese fondue..riight, hee hee cute though |
 willowbabe 2005-10-05 . chapter 1Umm, strange... and bizarre...
Where you craving Cheese fondue while writing this maybe?
It's very different. And odd. I like it though.
I also now have a craving for cheese fondue. |
 Dream Phantom 2005-10-05 . chapter 1Cute. |
 AllIWannaDo 2005-10-05 . chapter 1Aww...cute. What's with the Potter, though? You should write an all-dialogue ficlet about Lily and James. Lol! |