It is so great to finally see a story in which Paris finds some happiness. I found the point that was made about her not having a phone in her room to be particularly in character. Great job!

wow the wording just completely weirded me out. I don't think that Paris would talk like this. It's too revealing and raw, they'd try to hide some of that. Work on portraying hiden meanings... sorry if this sounds like a flame... it's not. I liked the idea a lot just not the dialect used in it. Oh well.

Laila*Lucine

VERY CUTE AND SWEET! Besides Paris deserves to be happy too. She really does, because of how lonely she is on the show. I think this is a great story :)

wonderful! You're sooooooo good at writing Paris stories!

WOW! Nathan! That was so great! I loved Clark! Very original and unique! Thank you! And you're right ... Paris does need someone like Clark! WOW!