 neon kun 2009-10-31 . chapter 95YO! WAHAHA. NABUHAY AKO. grabe. :)) sobrang dalawang taon na ata akong hindi nag-uupdate. gusto ko na magpaka-adik sa fanfiction ulit. nakakamiss.
AYUN! SORRY TALAGA. D: ngayon ko lang nakita. kasi grabe naman =)) ngayon lang din na ko nagbukas ng email =)) edukasyon kasi eh, panira sa oras ng pagsusulat! grabe ang college, ano? XD
wait, teka, review to. =)
I LOVE IT. BITIN NAMAN OH. :)) kakainis. =)) ang dense naman ni Kashime. =)) dun sa ancestors thing. :)) AT BAKIT NAMAN SI SAKURA NAISIP NIYANG PATAWARIN? =)) MALAMANG DIBA NA UNG NAGKASALA SA KANIYA? =)) PERO HINDI. HINDI. =)) KAKAINIS. :)) nagiging emotional ako. violent reaction much! =))
you have no idea how delighted i was to see multiple updates of this. xDD and sorry i didn't review at the other chapters - was much too excited to read the rest. =)) AT AYUN NA EH. makita ko WALA PA UNG CHAPPY NA PAPATAWARIN NA SI SASUKE. =)) sige na, masyado akong violent reaction! >:D< UPDATE ALREADY! *parang kaka-update lang eh noh?* UPDATE! UPDATE! =)
nakow, di ako papayag. dapat number one spot parin ako sa masuging tagapag-alala sa iyo ng pag-update. =)
Balik sa review. =)) Sorry, lakas ko mag-segue. :P ANG EPIC TALAGA NG MGA BUNTIS, FTW. ;) nakakatakot ang cravings =)) ang dami. =))
Balik, balik. =)) so ano ba ung plans nila Neji at sobrang takot na takot si Tenten? xD
And naiinis ako kay Kashime ah. =)) at lalo na ung Shio na yun. Sapul siya ni Kakashi. HAHA. :D Go Kakashi!! And, akala ko mas matanda si Yamato kay Kakashi? Tas wow ah, ang bait ni Sai talaga, in fairness. =))
AND WOAH DIN AH. :)) Major regret in Sasuke's system.
*segue* HAVE YOU READ THE LATEST NARUTO MANGA UPDATE?! My heart tore. D:
*going back* I HATE CLIFFHANGERS. Though yes, they're so much fun for the authors, so much of a boo to readers. =))
UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE*UPDATE!
:)) I WILL TEXT YOU. ;;) - HAHA, labo ko talaga. :))
Anyway, seriously. Eto na talaga. :)) I'm so glad you're able to write and update again. I waited for so long, you know? :)) I was always sad to see my email without a notification of your update. =)) If I only had load everyday (which, honestly, i only load... once a month or two), I would have pestered you nonstop.
Story-wise, really love how things developed. :) *Really love Kakashi sermonizing that bastard Shio* xD *and the many pregnant women cravings!* And the reverse in Sasuke and Sakura's position. Glad Sasuke's coming to his senses. Always late, but that's a given. If not, there won't be much of that part of the story. :| And that's the main point. The conflict of the two lovers' romance or love life. xD
Such a complicated one they have, I have to say. With much love, anguish, regret and VIOLENCE. :) and HATRED, of course. Not to mention that REVENGE that seems to love the spotlight way too much. :P
AND GOSH, UPDATE NOW. =))
And love how Tsunade thought of Kashime by the end. xD That was hilarious. :D :D :D You see, I have not reviewed any fanfictions for quite a LONG time now. And because it's this story, my enthusiasm was ignited. :)) I'm sorry you had to read such a long review. (When I think of it again, maybe I should've just sent this to you via private messaging. But I'm lazy now)
so to wrap it up: It was really good. Pieces of the pasts are well made to fit the present. :D More so, love the development of the story. As well as their love story. xD I'm glad that Sasuke's being a very obedient man, it's a good improvement on his part. :D HAHA, sabi ko wrap it up na. Ano ba yan, ang daldal ko. =))
Anyway, before I turn this review to an epic, I will just say that I loved it, as always, and UPDATE. Okay?! =))
*i will text you, just you wait* xD
~neon kun~ HAHA. UPDATE! |
 it'sSAOVADY 2009-10-06 . chapter 94I'm sorry ): I always forget to review until you send me a response and then I'm always like OHYEAH! I forgot to review. And I really would review for each chapter but I read both already and it's weird for me to just review one when I already read the next one to follow so I can't ask the questions that I normally answer when I try to foreshadow or something.
BUT about the two chapters I read. I aw'd at Sai being so caring and because Sakura DOES still love Sasuke and even Sai knows.
You know... I never thought about how Shio wanted Sakura's signature specifically for the treaty. I should have thought more into it, but GO KAKASHI for catching onto it. It's nice to have someone watch over you sometimes. (:
AND WWOWWZERS, Sakura's giving Sasuke a pardon? I hope she knows what she's doing and has it all planned. I don't want something terribly horrible to happen.
THANKS FOR UPDATING! I should try to do my homework now! UPDATE SOON! I'll be waiting even if it's a week, a month, a year, or years - let's hope that's not the case though, haha.
CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! You made it sound very interesting. |