Very cute little story. They make a good family.

YAY! I am SO so happy for them and this was a really good fluff-fest! I couldn't help but adore it.

THANKS FOR THE NICE FAMILY STORY. I REALLY ENKOYED THE STORY!

This story is GREAT! Do you any other chapter of them in their new home and their lives together with Brian?

Jeanette

Fluff, fluff, fluff! Wonderful fluff!

And Brian is so cute...

Great job! Very fluffy, but wonderful none the less. Thanks for writing such a great story!

hey do you happen to have a different email then gmail? Oh the reason why it did not go through was because I got rid of my account it was messing up my computer. But I don't know if you even want to give out your other email address if you have any.

Hi this is a great story. Do you like charmed also do you have another email address other then gmail cause my conmpter does not accept gmail I sent you a message saying were to go to answer my question.

Well done! :)

You wrap up everything nicely and have them on their way, new ID fresh from Eyes Only... ;)

I always cry at weddings and this was no exception. Nice descriptions. I really like the way you've done Original Cindy. Her speech patterns and behaviour are very appropriate to the character. Glad some of the old crowd could be there, too. Nice touch with the locket. :)

Max's confusion about the wedding rituals is perfectly natural.

Favourite lines:

“No. I was just waiting for the interruption. We always get interrupted when we are getting to the good stuff ... Sorry.”

(LOL! Ain't it the truth?)

“Mommy's orders-I gotta shave or we don't get married.” Logan smiles at him through the foam.

“Maybe I better shave too or she won't adopt me.”

(Very cute exchange.)

"If you can go with a few archaic hetero traditions, you'll be more traditional and less suspicious and avoid awkward questions. So please, Boo, go with the flow.”

(LOL! Very O.C. and nicely put.)

And I got the peridot for August. ;)

Just to ease my curiosity, what did Kendra give to Max for the wedding night?

Looking forward to more stories from you.

Cheers!

Mouse :P

Sorry I took so long to actually file a review. I think I was in a fluff induced coma for awhile there. That and for some unknown reason I thought I already reviewed this ;)

This is definitely the sweetest, fluffiest, story I’ve ever read.

If anyone ever gets around to defining what ‘mooch’ is to me; it is probably that too.

Could have used a few more details in the “etc” part, but … nothing is perfect.

Thanks,

Sweet chapter!

Things I liked in particular: The talking about the unusual way they reached the family status, taking pictures (so normal, somehow), OC’s worry, the locket and of course all the cute descriptions of little Brian.

Favourite sentences:

“Hey at least it didn't take me almost a year to get up the nerve,”

“No. I was just waiting for the interruption. We always get interrupted when we are getting to the good stuff ... Sorry.”

“Well it does have to be seen to be believed,”

And the cutest part: “Mommy's orders-I gotta shave or we don't get married.” Logan smiles at him through the foam. “Maybe I better shave too or she won't adopt me.”

Never heard of the birthstone thing before reading about it in DA fics, so no clue what August Weatherly's birthstone would be.

Why did you decide to write your story all in present tense? It was a fine story but hard to read because of this.

cool stuff... nice and fluffy...

dont know nething about birthstones, so didnt pick up on the august birthstone... but its cool stuff...

excellent job... :-)

Lots of happiness! :D

Makes sense for them to get out of Seattle. If they're going to do this, doing it right is the only way with Manitcore still a concern.

I hope Max and Logan can find *some* time for themselves - and soon! And certainly, turn off the ringer on the phone, lol. ;)

But... balloons! And lots of kisses! Brian is very sweet. I look forward to reading the next chapter and suspect a wedding will be involved. I always cry at weddings...

Cheers!

Mouse :)

Ah, you went with the choice I *thought* you'd go with. :)

Max and Logan are both, for different reasons, not in ideal circumstances for taking on the responsibility of a child so things would certainly have to change. I think of Logan's words not being so much 'devil's advocate' but a reality check, as it were, though no doubt Max is aware of what will be required. It's good that Logan is grounded.

I'm glad they found a relative. Max and Logan have been very isolated in their own lives and it'll help Brian to reconnect with someone who knew and cared for his mother.

I look forward to reading more. Thank you for sharing this story.

Cheers!

Mouse :)