Haha... awesome. I didn't even know you updated it though. I'm kind of confused about that. Way cool though. Nice to see all the loose ends tied up. =] "Oh, crap. I died" you captured Hay Lin perfectly right there. When I saw that I was just like 'uh...' haha.

uwah i loved it! ^^

a favorite story of mine...thank you...i thought reading willxcaleb fic would be weird but hey,since i've always liked that ship, you made my dream into reality..fic-wise i mean...thanks again..

This story line is good.But what were you thinking having Will and Caleb together and Hay Lin amd Matt together.It's mad
Will should be with Matt and Hay Lin with Eric ana Cornelia with Caleb.Anyone can see Will and Matt were maid for eachother.

Really enjoyed this story. I read some chapters a while back and I saw that this was completed, decided to finish it.

The time travel was handled very well, not like some fics do. Too bad nothing could be done about Susan (it did make for some great scenes in the last chapter) but Will's dad being a spy, cool and original.

No real nitpicks except that it got confusing sometimes when you switched between times. I caught on quick enough, anyway, and the switching of perspective during the final battle with line breaking it up was genius. Do I have your permission to steal the technique? I really want it! Please!

All in all, a great Will story that this Will fan enjoyed a lot.

A thoroughly enjoyable story, but it becomes fairly confusing in parts. Keep writing

I know it's late, but the one piece of advice I would give is to clarify when the segments are taking place. It jumped from the past to the future to the future/past so often I found it hard to keep up.

~Darev

It really hurts. I lost someone I cared about to a car crash two years ago. Susan was Will's only family so I can't imagine the absolute loss she must be feeling. Still, even if Yan Lin is paying for it, I don't think the authorities would allow a minor to live in a house all by herself.

Corny is shallow if she'd just dump Caleb like that. If a better-looking boy comes along, will she dump Lei too? Geez.

I can see where this relationship is going. I always say they make the better couple.

~Darev

great story

It has taken you three years to finish this story and here I am just finding out about it now. It looks good: the time premise is interesting and I want to keep reading to find out what happened in the future. I can guess a few things, but I don't want to fool myself into thinking I know where you are going. Instead, I'll just be surprised.

I caught a couple of spelling mistakes and Blunk's dialouge, at times, seems too refined to me. His sentences tend to be very short and abrupt, like he doesn't think before he speaks, which he does. That is what I felt in the first chapter. It seemed to get better the more I went along.

I like what you've done and I will continue to read later.

~Darev

so how did will's dad find out?

great story!!

“Oh crap, I died,” she said unhappily.

CLASSIC...LoL I was like, "Is she serious??" when I read that. HeHe ^_^

ANYWAY! TOOK you long enough, Deana, SERIOUSLY. S'pose you got tired of my harassing you 24/7 on dA then, huh? ^_^' Glad to see it FINALLY worked and made you get un-lazy and finish this kick arse story. ^_^

BUT, I AM a bit dissatisfied some, I will admit. I'm glad every loose end has FINALLY been tied up and all, and that F-Will (future) and F-Caleb reconciled and got back together, technically. BUT, I was honestly more, no, a LOT more interested in P-Will (present/"past") and P-Caleb. I was hoping to see some sort of...well, at LEAST hints of obvious things to come b/w them once she returned back to the present, ya know??

That was honestly my main driving force for continuing to read this fic...for 3 years...cough...~_~ LoL

But, ah well! Me likie, of COURSE. Classic, man, effin' CLASSIC. And now you've inspired me to finish writing my latest chapter of my "Beyond Death's Door" fic, I dunno why. That is, IDK why that particular W.I.T.C.H. fic of mine was the one that was like, "Finish writing me!" while reading this. LoL I'm not complaining ^_^'

But, yeah! I loved it! Woo! *Dances* And free advertising! I'm so popular! LoL...and very slow, cuz where was the nod to mah fic? LoL ^_^' Guess it's cuz it's late and I'm beat that I've missed it. ^_^ I DID kinda think of it in passing, though, during the final "present" scene with Will and her mammy (yes, I said "mammy" lol) bonded together. Just that whole dynamic. But yeah. LoL Where's the nod, damn it? ^_^'

Woo! Rock it! **' fic, babe! *Dances some more* ^_^

Awsome ending, can't wait ot see what youro ther w.i.t.c.h. turns out like as well (and any other w.i.t.c.h. fics you might have in the future)

I really like this story. I hope you will update soon. Have you given up on it?

can't wait till this is updated.