 PinaPoe 2009-04-02 . chapter 1This is an excellent story and I was heartbroken to see that it has sat untouched since 2006, please say it ain't so! |
 Vld 2008-09-28 . chapter 31Oh, I really loved that. I'm really hoping you write more because there are lots of things I would like to see. Like, for starters, when Ami tells her mother everything (and I do mean everything), and the good doctor tells her she knew. Or suspected.
What about Minako's mother discovering it? Both the senshi part and the mina being gay part.
When will the final show down between Pluto and Tachyon happen. How will they deal with Muon. Who's the x-on who will appear next. What will happen with Gylax (who seems to me the most... human of the enemies), and basically whatever will you come up with next.
Especially the Doctor Mercury's Chronicles, also-known-as the Venus's Slaughter of Both Basic and Really Specialized Knowledge. (The "Meson is where tiny French particles live" really did it for me!)
Even if you don't add more to it, though, I must say I really enjoyed this, you managed something incredible, and I thank you for that. |
 Vld 2008-09-28 . chapter 25Well, I did consider it being muon, but with Minako's idiotic comment of "She's just one crazy little girl. How hard can she be to outsmart?" I was expecting the crazy kid again.
When will heroes finally understand that you NEVER make statements like "It could be worse", "What else could happen" or stupidities like that? |
 Vld 2008-09-26 . chapter 13Oh, I lovd that chapter. The Special Extended Author's Note was a blast... and the only other particle that I can think of, which wasn't covered by mercury is the ion. But i'm almost sure it's not the one which will appear next.
Maison, huh? French particles... I don't know if I should laugh or be insulted by that... *frowns* I guess I'll settle for a little bit of both... then again, this is Minako. The queen of "open mouth, insert foot" so I guess I'll let it pass. For now. |
 Vld 2008-09-24 . chapter 3And after the kind of stupidity she showed in the previous chapters (okay, it was just obliviousness, but you know what I mean), she shows another kind of stupidity. The Senshi of Love, afraid to Love.
I REALLY love that. |
 Vld 2008-09-24 . chapter 2The Senshi of Love oblivious to her own love interest! I LOVE that! |
 ch0p 2008-08-14 . chapter 31 This is a really well written story. You have some of the best action scenes I've ever read in a Sailor Moon fic and the plot you have unraveling is unique and helps make your story stand out from the countless other fics out there. I admit I came across this story ages ago but didn't really want to try it out because I was hesitant on how the dynamics of a Ami/Minako pairing would work out. But man am I glad I decided to finally give it a go! Took me quite awhile to get through all 31 chapters but boy was it worth it! The pacing in which you laid out their relationship from good friends to something more was really well done. There time for the reader to understand Ami and Minako as individuals and then get slowly introduced into the idea of why the two of them together.
I noticed you haven't updated this in a long time but that isn't a reason for me not to leave a little review to show my appreciation. So anyway I wish you all the best with whatever you're up to these days. Thanks for the great read! |
 Strangeness 2008-04-08 . chapter 1Hm, it is just too sad. I come by here once in a while, hoping that there might be a new chapter. Well, this is pretty useless, as I have this story on Alert anyway, but still...my hope dies last!
Is there any chance that you might continue this story or will it stay unfinished? I would be really happy if I would get an answer to that, so please...
Best wishes and thanks for all the chapters so far! |
 suisei no mitsukai 2007-06-05 . chapter 31Ok it's been a year and that can't be the end of this story. Honestly this is one of the best Sailor Moon fics out there and it's sitting here sad and unfinished. I greatly enjoyed this story and would be extremely happy if you decided to finish it someday. Please consider continuing and finishing this fic. Keep up all the great work. |
 writer-jm 2007-03-19 . chapter 24Hi, I'm not exactly sure where my brain is (it's Spring Break), but I wanted to continue the review! Sorry for such a big leap. I don't have internet in my dorm room at college.
I really like how Minako decided to be romantic and sneak up to Ami's room. Looks like they were really happy to see each other! Really sweet too. A little bit physical, but a whole lot emotional (the way it should be).
The couple of fights were good as well. I really liked how Setsuna's purposefully facing off against Tachyon! (it makes her sound so cool!)
I'm also surprised to see that I'm enjoying the Michiru/Rei/Makoto drama! I'm such a cheesy fluffy writer, that I'm surprised to enjoy a little angst so much. I guess it helps that there's a balance with the Mina/Ami Sweetness!
Your villains are still fun and interesting. Some might say they're cliche, but cheesy villains are a part of the fun! That way you focus more on the relationships. Now their inter-villain relationships are far more complex. Betrayals are common, but these have been a tad bit unexpected.
On a personal question, what other anime do you like? Most authors put pairings and stuff on their bios, but yours is short and sweet to the point. Mine's sort of long winded (there are some that go on for ages!). I'd hope to write something to catch your attention as a return favor for the Ami-Mina sweetness(this is how I will refer to the story from now on!!)
You know it's really funny... When I saw you name "Physics Queen" combined with Jessica, it made me think I might know you. There was a nice girl named Jessica who sang (and played the piano) to the Periodic Table! I thought it was pretty cool how she could be scientific and artistic at the same time. You two sound a lot a like. (That's a compliment by the way!)
Thanks for all the fun! I'll try to finish the story soon and get you another review!!
Sincerely,
writer-jm |
 Lone Voice 2007-03-18 . chapter 31please up date this story. please i want to know the ending. i like this story and i hope that you will pick it up again. |
 writer-jm 2007-03-12 . chapter 8Hi!
It doesn't look like you've been active for a while, but I just wanted to give you a nice review for what I've read so far!
I really like the Mina/Ami pairing in general. It's a nice "opposites blend together" pairing. Your story does an excellent job of not rushing the whole thing.
I like the villians too. It's been a long, long, long, long time since I've seen any episodes of the show. Your villians fit perfectly into that vein!
Your level of detail is also excellent. I can easily picture the costumes, attacks, etc. (which is sometimes hard for me).
It's been great so far. I'm going to continue reading and give out hopefully a couple more reviews! I forgot who recommended this to me, but it was great!
I hope you're still around! If so, give me a buzz (PM or review reply). Thanks!
Sincerely,
writer-jm |
 kamikazecat 2007-01-30 . chapter 1Please, oh please, oh please, oh please update!! I love this story so much! You're an incredible writer, and its so rare to find Ami/Minako stories that are so well written!
~Kamikazecat |
 LaTragicomedia 2006-12-11 . chapter 31I hope you haven't given up on this.: ) It's a wonderful fic and actually, I much prefer Ami and Minako to Ami and Mako which seems to be the more common coupling.
Great job on this!^^ |
 ARITYGER 2006-11-21 . chapter 31 I LOVED THIS I HOPE THAT WASNT THE END. THIS MIGHT SOUND A LITTLE FUNNY BUT I HAD JUST GOTTEN DONE READING THIS FOR THE 5TH TIME AND AS ALWAYS I FIND MYSELF WISHING THAT THERE WAS MORE. I CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT, THANK YOU FOR THIS GIFT.
ARI TYGER
AKA MICHI. |