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Reviews for: Harry Potter and the Missing Pieces
Caspia1717
2008-03-22 . chapter 6
Please continue I really like your story.
Edmond O'Donald
2008-03-15 . chapter 6
I'd really like to see you continue this story! You've got me intrigued and it would be fun to know how all of the tensions (as well as Voldemort's attempted possession of Harry) are resolved.

Plus- since this is supposed to be a HHr fic, it will be good to see how you get them together (finally!)

So...please? it's fun to see someone write like this. You're good...you don't make grammatical errors, nor do you have spelling mistakes, etc. When someone writes cleanly like that, it's great.

Regards,

the_scribbler
irish gal 2
2007-08-12 . chapter 5
Very good so far lots of suspense, I like that. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Chibi-Penguin-Chan
2006-02-16 . chapter 3
Nice story, but there were many mistakes. For one you spelt 'Hogsmeade' wrong several times. I checked the books, and it does have an 'e' at the end. Also, you spelt 'Horcuxes' wrong. It doesn't have an ' in it.
Other than that, awesome story! I loved it!
Serindipity9
2006-02-11 . chapter 3
Very good. I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!
Steel-Pheonix
2005-11-26 . chapter 2
Interesting...
igbogal
2005-11-26 . chapter 2
Hey, this is great! The dialogue is spot-on, and that's really hard to do - you go! Please continue. Please? With chocolate frogs on top?
Amber Komasaki
2005-11-26 . chapter 2
Aw, i like the new chapter! You need to write more soon, okay? I need to know what happens next, haha!
Update soon!
Amber Komasaki
2005-10-09 . chapter 1
Aw, I love it! I'm so proud of you, Amara! Keep it up, I told you your stories were good! Update soon!
JessMess
2005-10-06 . chapter 1
that was really good.
i can't wait for more.
CYA
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