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paradise723
2008-05-20
ch 7,
abusei'm a big fan of your current story 'Gone'. I am really enjoying it. But 'Broken'is my all time favorite of your stories. Will you please update this soon, maybe after 'Gone'? I really hope so.
FeistyFeist
2008-04-12
ch 7,
abusefor the love of all things holy, will you please update??

:)
blue moon
2008-02-10
ch 7,
abuseeven though it's sad, it's a good story, please write more soon
waniphil
2008-01-19
ch 1,
abuseWhy don't you update? please!! I want to read more. This has some different things like Steve's character or his brother story. I love it. And I love your others stories, too.
xemmiex
2008-01-17
ch 7,
abuseupdate? :)
Two-BitGortez
2007-04-18
ch 7,
abusecant wait to read more
LiL PriNCeSs Me
2007-02-18
ch 7,
abuseah you updated again! yey!! omg i loved this chapter.. i do i do i do! everything bout it, just great! EVERYTHING! lol. hm... pony's such a good liar lol, so when is everyone gonna find out what really happened?? poor steve, i really like him, ur fic makes me a steve fan haha, i've always liked him, i just like him more now lol.. well anyway keep going! im looking forward for more!
Laughing
2007-02-18
ch 7,
abuseAh, wonderful, wonderful. I love the part where Ponyboy looks at Steve and says that he fell off his bike. This was a great chapter, and you captured it amazingly. I liked that you made the emotions real without making them cheesy. I also liked how Soda just kept talking to Ponyboy about something else because it seems like something Soda would do. And again, you write Steve so well.
Update soon, por favor.
waterpolo12
2007-02-18
ch 7,
abusehope you update soon. i wonder if steve is gonna tell the guys.
.RoAr.LiKe.A.lIoN.
2007-02-18
ch 7,
abuseOk... so basically I love your story!! Update ASAP!
~Sarah
Dallysangel
2007-02-18
ch 7,
abuseThis is really good. Update soon, poor Steve and pony.
xodamhsoirxo
2007-02-18
ch 7,
abuseAh you should be a published author, you write so well. I loved it seriously, I was sitting here holding my breath like Pony probably was, that's how good it was. Update soon.
xCrazyx
2007-02-18
ch 7,
abuseI'd just like you to know that your update has made my/i> day. I love this story so much and I hope you update it this fast again. Thank you!!

Trinity
ivy45663
2007-02-14
ch 6,
abuseI know Steve prolly deserves it, but Pony shouldn't tell on him. They should work it out and try to help Josh.
Pictures
2007-02-14
ch 6,
abuseyahh you updatedd :)
great chapter,
can't wait for the next chapter!

Update son!
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