I've taken a hiatus of SaB Book three due to writer's block there, so I decided to work on a few extras in the meantime...and school's been cutting in a lot.
Don't worry, it has not been abandoned

Wow! Great chapter. I love how you've written this story in first person, it helps bring the reader into the story. Just a question, are you still writting shadows of blood book three? The other shadows of blood kicked ** and I'm sure the third would also. Keep up the good work.

Hmm, a few conventions mistakes, but beside that, very nice stuff you've got going here. You really capture the mood of your charcters in a one-person perspective, and Drais has a lot of interesting charcter. It's enetertaining to glimpse the story through his eyes. keep it up!

I've got two words for you: kick **!

you are a talented writer, no hiding it, and this is a great story. Like I said before, I would enjoy the completion of this one, it's just really, really good!

~Ice Fox

I like, Eroket. Though they are some technical issues, this story is coming along very nicely.

I have finally pushed myself to review.

I find this very interesting so far, and I hope to keep reading. I do need to read your other works to fully comprehend the plot, however.

Cool, I like it, keep it up Ero!

Nice! I didn't know you were this good at one-person perspectives! I'm really enjoying this; if you add a few more chapters and they're of the same quality, this is going on my favs.

You know, Drais's POV is VERY entertaininga nd hooking-I think you could work soem humor in this story. This has a few references to "The Strings Snapped", am I right? You know, this could turn out to be a prelude to Shadows and Blood 2 & 3, what with Davrag Joris as a teen in it. My only crit would be too put numbers in words not digits-just flows better in a story. Good job!

Awesome! I really like the first person perspective in the first half of the chapter! This is going to be an awesome story and I beg you to write more on, no, finish this wonderful story.

~Ice Fox