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| Hiryo 2005-11-30 ch 2,  | abuseIt's 'OBI-WAN'! Please get a pre-reader since THAT MANY Grammatik- & spelling-errors case many reader away. |
| Jerry Unipeg 2005-11-05 ch 1, | abuseGreat start. |
| Bobboky 2005-10-07 ch 1, | abusevery good |
| Wonderbee31 2005-10-06 ch 1, | abuseGood section here, and looking forward to how training goes, as well as how this might change things in SW canon. |