This is such a beautiful image and works so well with their never ending chase. Oh, it's so sad that Al begins to doubt. But he'll always follow Ed and his dream. Even if Ed's dream is to make him whole and even he begins to doubt. This is tragic. Wow.

Wow talk about depressing. Awesome mediphore use though.

It's... so depressing! But a great metaphor really. It's really well written! Good job! :)

Oh my gosh, that is so sad. The last line was too heartbreaking for words. Lovely, lovely fic. This is on my favorites list!