great story! =D

WOW, you really do write very original stories :D I like it ^^

I love it! Thanks for writing it. :)

That was a great story! Keep up the good work:)

aw, awesome, it's so good! :love:

that was pretty great, I liked it.
D&S

OMG, so sweet!




From Me x

very cute.

I love you and your story. It was beautiful. you are going under my favourite story and author.
I also read your other stories too and love it.

I am a mpreg "lover", so these stories really makes me happy.

this is a very good story and i think that you should do a sequel with harry and draco's life with the children and when draco comes into his full inheritance. when draco's dad finds out about them.

i like this one but wahy is it called firelflies?

I really really enjoyed that story a lot. I almost wish it wasn;t a one shot but I guess sometimes short and sweet is better. Again it was terrific.

Look, I know that this is quite a good idea for a one shot, and I wouldn't have minded so much if the mpreg wasn't so unnatural. I'm sorry but I can't stand mpreg when it involves babies being born the same way as a woman. Honestly, where do expect the babies to come out? He's a MALE, which means there is no uterus and no birthing canal for them to come out of. IF the mpreg was done with some thought to biological detail, I wouldn't have minded, nor said anything. But I repeat, there is no possible way for a male to give bitrh.
Now, having said that, you are going to think of this as a flame, but in all honesty, I did like the story. It was a good idea, for Malfoy's world to change so drastically in two days. I did enjoy the story, although the birthing scene irked me, but I did find it quite amusing that Ron and friends heard screams from the dorm and couldn't get in, etc. What would they think, how would they react, that Harry managed to hide being pregnent for 9 or so months.
So thats it from me, I'm sorry if you found the start rather offensive.

o.O *raises eyebrow* Okay. Weird, but I always think of mpreg as weird but the story was fine. Odd, but fine.
~Akire

I so didn't want this to end!