 Darkness Lurking Behind You 10/2/01 . chapter 1prtty good so far... nice,anne... |
 Saturnian Blonde 2lazy2signin 7/6/01 . chapter 9 i loved it! that was soooo great! you have to write a sequel! The writer's guild demands it! or... whatever, just keep the ball goin! |
 Lady Callie 5/12/01 . chapter 4Oh dear! Maxie! Help! Great story! I'm hooked! -LadyCallie |
 Lady Callie 4/22/01 . chapter 3Noooo! Max! Come back! What's wrong with her? Why is she feeling so sick and stuff? There's got to be more to it then the prank call, right? NEway, Nice work! I enjoyed it! -LadyCallie |
 ajquest 4/22/01 . chapter 3That was so sad. Bring Max back. Logan needs her. What's up with Mugen. Please write more. |
 Lady Callie 4/22/01 . chapter 2Very intresting! I like your style. :) More anytime! -LadyCallie |
 ajquest 4/21/01 . chapter 2What is going on? Who is this mystery girl? |
 lc 4/21/01 . chapter 1 MORE! |
 ajquest 4/21/01 . chapter 1Leaving us hanging like that wasn't nice. The people want more from you. :) |
 JoeyJoeJoeJR 4/20/01 . chapter 1 ahhh u gotta write more... need to know more about this mystery girl... Write more! |
 DarkAngelfan 4/20/01 . chapter 1 Please continue! Good job! You've got me hooked! :) |