i like this chap very much it's really great! alec was scared of flying, just like dean in supernatural! and i'm looking forward to their journal to hawaii! please update this fic soon!

Great chapter, so Alec hates flying, hehe. Who would have thought! Plz update soon...

Please let Cindy get the red head...

Oh nice part about the bike... Max is missing her little baby as we speak...

And Alec being quiet... (gasp) He needs three things after that trip. Aspin, Water, and Stewardess...

Now I can't wait until they land. And Tinga...

Till next chapter,

Hearns

Didn't see the Phantom clip, lol. Good chapter I like that OC is already eyeing up the talent.

LOL , that was cute ! poor Alec! anyway i liked plz update soon !

I love this, wher the next chapter? :-)

hehe! really funny! please update soon!

Max,Alec in swimwear, this is gonna be interesting. I so hope they get together. Please update soon.

Good ! i cant wait to read more ! i like where this is going !

stupid but lovely Sketchy! please update soon!

Zombies... right what Weed was Sketchy smoking? Must have been some powerful stuff or... Sex with a Zombie... Hum... I can't wait to figure out what happened to Tinga... A phone call might be nice to help smooth things over with Max. Max didn't talk with Tinga all that much when they were on the run so having a sisterly talk might be nice in the next chapter and speed up some of the plot development. Max in her candel lit apartment and Tinga in her home. Might be an explanation of what Renfro was looking for in Tinga's body. Also, she could have nanites like Zack did. The dead body look might just have been from vitamine deficency from being in the tank. Though having Tinga wake up in a morge might make the Zombie thing realistic for Sketchy... "They How did I get here lying on a metal slab naked?" Might be good to play with...

Will I await your next chapter...

Brains... Good...

Hearns out...

hey been waiting for an update for a while, glad its here. i'm liking this, hopefully it'll be m/a im a big fan.

Another great chapter, oh Sketchy is so funny when he confused, hehe! OC going with them, would be lotsa fun if she did! Plz update soon...

Love Sketchy, confused and saying all the wrong things.

Like the way Alec's comment got OC interested in joining them. Please continue.

really liked this chap! alec is so pradictable, he just loves 2 c a pretty girl! thought it was funny with sketchy an OC! she is 1 scary lady when she is ** off! lol! please up date soon!