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Nachoman1
2006-02-24
ch 1,
abuseThe A-Team as more reincarnated Moonfolk?
Weird, especially as you made it feasible!

Nothing worse than Baracus in a fuku, though.
HolyKnight
2005-11-30
ch 1, anon.
abusewhat in the nine hells were you smoking when you wrote this?

BWHAHAHAHAHAHAA!

except for the sailor BadAss part(what made my eyes BURN) it was downright hilarious...
Iceman
2005-11-06
ch 1, anon.
abuse*Hits Trimatter on the head with a 12 pound sledghammer* That was too weird for my tastes!
Wonderbee31
2005-10-11
ch 1,
abuseOh Lord, things are getting insane now, and yes, Sailor Bad **, along with the other members must continue, Please? This was great, and like Spamalot, is just too good to leave alone.
Chronos the Cat
2005-10-10
ch 1,
abuselol! That was great!
DarkKeeper
2005-10-09
ch 1, anon.
abuseI liked this alot. But one thing has me confused, Who are the guys? What show are they from?
Although I don't know where they are from, I still liked them a lot. The part of a guy in a fuku just made me smile, a panda-second opinion/friend made me laugh (Matching tux, good my stomach! I need air!)
Also the Good Demons Almanac was great.
Cant wait till you write some more.
borg rabbit
2005-10-08
ch 1,
abuseT lost a bet with Serenity? Set paddles. CLEAR! Buzzap! Oh, thought I'd laughed myself to death for a minute there. I pray that this is a prelude to another chapter of 'Aftermath' and hope that Real life is treating you well. Thanks for writing.
Ciao,
Wes
DarkRubberNeck
2005-10-08
ch 1,
abuseThis story was a work of brilliance. You managed to make an extremely funny and silly story, while still seeming somewhat serious. Anyway I loved it. Would be nice to see more stories along this line, however other stories just tend to comme out too silly.
Materia-Blade
2005-10-07
ch 1, anon.
abuseintresting... however. I think i would rather see the next chapter more. Though I guess it'll hold me over. It wasn't really as twisted as you make it out to be...

wish i knew who colonel decker was though. Neways. Aftermath = great fic! Please continue it soon!
Dumbledork
2005-10-07
ch 1,
abuseHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! ... VERY FUNNY! ENCORE, ENCORE,

But seriously, this is one of the funniest stories I ever read. I want to read more of this stuff. I ORDER you to write more. Sailor Bad ** rulez!
Innortal
2005-10-07
ch 1,
abuseLOL, very priceless.

Innortal
Kitsune
2005-10-06
ch 1, anon.
abuse...

All I can say is...

...
Ghent Johanson
2005-10-06
ch 1,
abuseThis is definatly a "way-off-to-the-side story". BA in a fuku was just too much fun, and them building a mech from junk is defiantly A-Team style. I hope to see some more of Aftermath soon, and you could always have the Alpha Guards do a cameo. That would be fun. Anyways , thanks for writing and keep up the good work.
WarGiver
2005-10-06
ch 1,
abuseWords can not properly describe this... not that that is a bad thing... in any sense. lets see more of the main story
Delta-Theta
2005-10-06
ch 1,
abuseYa know that ALMOST brought back the memories of the show "A-team" or whatever it was called i remember watching this and Macguyver back them !!

Just to let you know i am now going to hunt you down for giving be bad mental pictures of Mr. T in a fuku, but you know what i am going to do first I am going to send a copy to him myself :P heh heh

funny and well written... Just don't EVER do this again.. if that author tries to pervert your mind again just remember that things like this lead to the dark side heh heh

Delta-Theta

P.S. how is the next chapter of Aftermath coming along been waiting for awhile ok so don't keep us waiting too much longer! or I might follow through on my threat with Mr. T backing me up (big grin)
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