i thought it was a good plot, but it was too abrupt.

sweet bye.

I think that is sad ya know I think this is my second time reading this pause... It is I remember telling GG my sis about it will I have know idea why I didn't reveiw but what ever its still good.

I didn't really like it that much. Riza was way out-of-character. I could never picture Riza doing something like that to Roy; she is far too loyal and dedicated to Roy to leave him in the dust like that. The plot moved way too fast as well. I think the story could use more detail and you should work on keeping the characters in line.

the plot went too fast. but i guess that's the climax. also...SO. CUTE. OMFG. THAT WAS SO. CUTE. and sad. *sigh*

please write a second chapter.

I think it's a good fic and very sad (i luv sad fic's) but some things just don't make sense here (duh it's fictional haha) in Riza's bye-bye letter she wrote: "i know this will hurt you" so she knows he loves her as well. Why still leave? If i knew a guy loved me i wouldn't be afraid to face him. He even said he wanted to kiss her some more so he devently made his point of liking her. Well anyway i'm not flaming you, totally NOT. it's a very nice thing ... just that little thing bugged me haha. I hope you write many more in the future you have a nice way of telling it all rizaXroy 4EVAH hihi (ps: don't mind my grammar, english isn't my mother tounge)

Not bad a little sad that you broke up the Dynamitic Duo

Why does it had to be so sad..Sob,sob..I'm drowning in tears..

oh no i'm gonna start crying now too... Such a tragic love story. I loved it despite the fact they aren't together...