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| em 2005-10-24 ch 3, anon. | abuseah a cliffy im sure all will become clear as the fic progresses good job so far. |
| angw 2005-10-14 ch 3, | abuseWell now I want to see it too. Cliffhangers - you always know where to leave the story so we are all left in suspense...good job :D |
| Innogen 2005-10-14 ch 3, | abuseUhm...maybe they should have brought back the other box, as well? Wraith weapon, or not? ::giggle:: Innogen *I'm beginning to think that nothing goes smooth for people in the Pegasus Galaxy...I wonder if they are ancestors to Firefly's Serenity's crew?* |
| angw 2005-10-06 ch 1, | abuseThe soul of Sha’ell...that is an interesting turn of events. Rodney given into sleep...tut tut tut I think that he should have awoken someone else to continue with the research, with the green light and ancient device started up. |
| kokopelli24 2005-10-06 ch 1, | abuseOoh, I intrigued! What DOES the device do and why was Greene able to activate it? Great job of making her mysterious too. I'm not sure if I like her or if she has some hidden agenda...or maybe she's trying to flirt with Rodney! Can't wait for more! :) |