COOL!_

That was greeeeeaaaaaaaaattttttt! I would love to see a sequel!

I applaude you. Nice little plot, as well as a bit of inventive thinking. For someone so young, you can write good. Plus the 1st of anything is always the hardest... Check out my Megaman fic "The Plague of Evil" under GamesMegaman to get the prologue of my first fic (ever).

interesting, nice concept. I liked it

It was so cute!You did it great,but It would be even better if you'd made Arnold's parents more into it,they would be more surprised.I don't say that to be harsh or anything,only to help...but ya don't really need it!;)

I loved it!

That was so cute! a little out of character, but I enjoyed it! :)

That was a great first fic!

loved it