Adding depth to the 'mutant universe' again, I see. The little guy actually reminds me of Nightcrawler.

Oh, Please, please give us more. I'm on my knees begging here, and I *don't* beg. DON'T KILL ELI, HE'S SUCH A GOOD BOY. LET ELI LIVE.

Cool story! It could be a series, but its great just as it is

Cool story, and an interesting idea.

good idea. by the way, amish people probably wouldn't know what a mutant was and if this boy is more than 15 he'd be wild anyway. but interesting concept.

In the spirit of constructive critisism, I like it. I don't know weither or not the Mutant Underground is your creation or not but I like it anyways. As for the amish kid, it was an intresting idea to mix a group of people who would not understand mutants with a mutant. Making them see it as religion and not evolution is very Darwin of you and I like that alot. All in all this only proves my saying "The only good Amish is one that randomly shoots energy from his body"

I'm sorry, I haven't read the story I was just looking for Gambit stories and I noticed one of the names in the fanfic - Eli Penn. Well, I just thought I'd let you know that Eli Pen is Welsh for 'Head Cream'! Just thought I'd share that with you , sorry, Bye!