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| Arachne21 2005-10-17 ch 1, | abuseLike other reviewers, this part absolutely killed me: "McGee has a girlfriend Her name is ‘Imaginary’ She’s made-up" HAHAHHAHA! That was hilarious -- I actually laughed out loud! I don't know how you did it, but you absolutely managed to capture the essence of Tony, it was wonderful! Oh, do you take requests? Would you do one for Abby next? :-) Great work! |
| Guevera 2005-10-08 ch 1, | abuseThat was err... interesting! I gotta say, you did get the characters spot on though! One thing, Kate's dog, Tony, is a female, not male as you put... Well done, love to see if he does rewrite it! |
| lissa-bhw 2005-10-08 ch 1, | abusei loved this book when i was little! the little girl who lived in the plaza? (i think... my memory sucks!) it's so like tony too! |
| kap0w 2005-10-08 ch 1, | abuseMcGee has a girlfriend Her name is ‘Imaginary’ She’s made-up -falls off chair laughing- thuper stuff, it was a book thingy, i'd buy it |
| LillyLikeyMiley 2005-10-07 ch 1, | abuseLol! i loved it!! it should so be published as a childrens book, well maybe not a childrens book, but definately a picture book! lol! its so Tony-like! I'd love to see the rewrite! lol! i read it aloud to my little brother, he loved it too! i esp. love this part: Sometimes I wear a rubber band On the end of my nose i cracked up laughing so hard at that part, that my brother gave me a funny look! plz post more soon!! I love your fics! Love Megan |
| outrageous band geek 2005-10-07 ch 1, | abusewow. That's really special! Thank you SO much for telling me what Fo schizzle means!! guess what? I HAVE A SPORK! That seriously made my day! :-) WOOT! I love Tony's story. It should be published. Not really. Still really funny though |
| DinozzoFan 2005-10-07 ch 1, | abuseLOL very in-character good. very funny. |
| CSIMel 2005-10-06 ch 1, | abusegiggle, that was adorable. McGee's imaginary g.f. - classic! that was thuper! |
| The Italian Peach 2005-10-06 ch 1, | abuse*crickets chirp* HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA! What a great story. I lovve it! |