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BettyHall223
2007-05-30
ch 1,
abuseThat made me laugh out loud. I could just see them doing this, especially, the blaming each other.
The Green Dragon
2005-10-10
ch 1,
abuseGood chap! ROTFLMAO!
MasterJediJ
2005-10-09
ch 1,
abusewill you do a sequil plz
Lerrinus
2005-10-08
ch 1, anon.
abuseROTFLMAO! that was hilarious.
*gigglegigglegiggle*
Fave line:
“Well, all of this from a little walk in the park. I hope you have plenty of tranquilizers, Doctor!”

“Primed and ready, Sir. Would you like one?” She smiled knowingly.

Keep up the fun stories! :-D
Questionablelight
2005-10-08
ch 1,
abusehehehe, brilliant. what makes it funnier is that its in their own backyard rather than offworld. They really can make a drama where ever they go!
froggy0319
2005-10-07
ch 1,
abuseLOL - Only SG-1 could get in trouble having a picnic. Thanks for making me smile :)
Mickey Ryan
2005-10-07
ch 1,
abuseThat was hilarious! Just what I needed to finish off this horribly long week. Thank you for making me laugh.
banner
2005-10-07
ch 1,
abuse* rolls eyes *
* has a fit of the giggles *

Fun!
everg8er23
2005-10-07
ch 1,
abuseLol, great story!
wolflets
2005-10-07
ch 1,
abusefunny story, you had me giggling the whole way :)
SGCFan4ever
2005-10-07
ch 1,
abuseLOVED IT!
SG-Fan
2005-10-07
ch 1,
abuseGood job!
Jennyvre Moss
2005-10-06
ch 1,
abuserofl...that was hilarious...i loved it when daniel whacked jack in the face...i couldn't stop laughing..

keep writing
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