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| Ninja Master 2008-08-06 ch 2,  | abuseAwasome ch up date more soon! |
| panda0031698 2008-05-04 ch 12, | abuseok still good but i do have critasisum this time and it took reading it again to realise this but you keep giving shego a dye job some times he has black hair and sometimes she has brown hair. brunette means brown haired if you didn't know. reading this the second time i noticed this and it does confuse you if you think about it to much |
| panda0031698 2008-04-04 ch 13, | abusei simpaly love this story |
| RDF-73 2008-04-04 ch 13, | abuseWell read up to your last Chapter and it leaves me wanting more. So Hope you will update soone |
| Lord Zander 2008-03-10 ch 13, | abusecool story, but i was wondering when/if ron goes back to his home dimension will shego go with him? Also can you mention what is hapeening in kims demiension, i think it will be funny with how she could torment drakken, lol update soon :) |
| ranma hibiki 2008-01-19 ch 13, | abusei like this ron!! ^_^ no afraid of girls anymore, even making THEM blush >=D |
| Comet Moon 2008-01-17 ch 13, | abuseLove this series Look forward to more New fan Ja ne Jim |
| aedan cameron 2008-01-08 ch 13, | abuseJust a duel to the death? GAH! I like the bonding in this chapter. Aedan |
| bigherb81 2008-01-08 ch 13, | abuseGlad to see you back and with such a cool chapter. You know the more I read of this story the more I see you have a knack for fantasy as well as romance. The varuflur and the dragon skin. A lot of detail and technical terms that I wouldn't have guessed about them. As usual will be waiting for the next chapter but take all the time you want because the chapters are always worth the wait. |
| CajunBear73 2008-01-08 ch 13, | abuseNice intro for Shego with her armor and training. She and Ron are becoming more of a team in her apprenticeship and OJT seems to be the way to learn here. Ron does fill in the blanks well, but he still shocks Shego with more of the life they are involved in. Good moment with the wolf and the aftermath. CB73 |
| Bobboky 2008-01-08 ch 13, | abusenice |
| AtomicFire 2008-01-07 ch 13, | abuseDuel to the death?!?!? Now this will be cool. Nice work with Ron taunting Shego and Shego's new suit... any timeline on when they'll start looking for that portal home... or will they? |
| Zekerion 2007-10-23 ch 12, | abuseWow, awesome story man, interesting concept as well as good writing, spotted little if any spelling/grammar mistakes. All around an awesome story and one I hope to see more of soon. ^^ |
| mkusenagi2 2007-10-22 ch 12, | abuseA wonderful chapter. MK2 |
| VikingJedi 2007-09-23 ch 12, | abuseJust re-read this story for the second time. I really like it. I think you do a good job with the character interaction. Your dialog work seems ok to me. Don't worry about it too much. I hope you can update soon. You must push real life to the side and update your story! |