Okay, Patricia Marchbanks as in Griselda's grandaughter or sumthin?

To be honest the writing isn't all that great, but it doesn't make for a terrible read. You did do good characterisations, which is always a good thing. I mean, if you're writing HP fan fiction, you are supposed to use the characters and general outlines already established by JKR. If you want to bollock up the whole thing you may just as well write an original work. A Harry Potter who suddenly goes gay or a Dumbledore that is working with Voldemort is as likely as me inheriting the rights for HP. Sure, it would be fun, but it just ain't happening, chaps. Get over it!

Again, the plot sounds fun, the characters are good but you should work on your writing skills. That's the best I can offer so far.

Good luck.

AWSOME!

I found this story to be one of the better Harry takes charge themed story. I very much liked this fic and the way events have so far unfolded. The only thing I did not like was to get to the "end" and discover that I'd read all that you've written. So please continue this sotry to save oyur readers from maddness!

Wow, I really like your story, but am sad to see that it hasn't been updated in over a year.
I'm very curious to see what that particular information about Voldemort will do to his followers.
I hope that you will re-start this story, and will wait patiently for a new chapter, should it ever come.

how do i explain this story. **

love the story... harry is so kick **. lol. update soon

this story is awesome. and i hope you continue the story

Love it! Take LV's future supporters and tell them the truth. Love it.

I am looking forward to reading more of this story soon.

Draco is about to find out what real power is.

Good chapter.

Good choice to manage the chain.

Poor Neville!

Oh heavens.

Hee hee Sounds like a good day.

Good chapter. He really shouldn't have lied to Ginny. He is doing to his friends what Dumbledore did to him. Making decisions for them.